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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Sat Apr 30, 2011 4:24 am | |
| no no no, i still take some damage. Like a big NONLethal wound is left. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Mon May 02, 2011 7:46 pm | |
| No, the only solution is if it rains all your chakra for the remainder of the topic. Im a kage level as well and all my abilities consume massive chakra, and they are less potent then that.
CD: Once every three fights.
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Mon May 02, 2011 7:50 pm | |
| So one use per three topics? | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Mon May 02, 2011 7:55 pm | |
| Yeah, flash backs don't count |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Tue May 03, 2011 11:24 am | |
| Name Mark of the Dark Element: Darkness Appearance A small black line that moves aroud the body Description: Akki will place a small black line on an enemy's body of his darkness kkg. This will slowly drain the enemy of said thing *stat, speed, strength, chakra, (possibly element as long as its in place?)*
Duration: lasts until Akki is knocked out or seal is removed with a jutsu Cool Down: once per three topics *or is that too much?* | |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Wed May 04, 2011 7:16 pm | |
| Element: Clan element Element: Darkness (not dark release) Appearance nothing really... Description: Akki is able to use all of his clan jutsu without a handseal, but some motion must be made (wave of a hand) and the jutsu must be spoken. Oragakumi still needs a single hand seal. Other jutsu that isnt a clan jutsu still needs a hand seal.
Duration: supplementary Cool Down: supplementary | |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Wed May 04, 2011 7:29 pm | |
| Element: Clan element Element: Darkness (not dark release) Appearance Description:
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ZodiacWolf Genin
TP : 0 Posts : 234 Join date : 2011-03-03 Age : 30
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Vanguard Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Wed May 04, 2011 7:31 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Wed May 04, 2011 8:49 pm | |
| wait a minute I have to say this isn't approved yet. I have to say this is incredibly op imo and I'm definitely going to get an admin to look to make sure. so before this is approved it's getting double checked. Both the first and second need to be looked at more carefully :/ |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Wed May 04, 2011 9:03 pm | |
| Dei, ouro said oky as long as its obce per three topics. Second I asked if elements were okay and since there was no response its just stat. Lio's idea. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Wed May 04, 2011 11:52 pm | |
| Okay I talked to Ouro and he told me that this needs a second opinion so here goes mine Name Mark of the Dark Element: Darkness Appearance A small black line that moves aroud the body Description: Akki will place a small black line on an enemy's body of his darkness kkg. This will slowly drain the enemy of said thing *stat, speed, strength, chakra, (possibly element as long as its in place?)*
Duration: lasts until Akki is knocked out or seal is removed with a jutsu Cool Down: once per three topics *or is that too much?*
Okay this ability is simply op :/ it's simply a chakra draining technique as it basically states in the ability and guess what that is FORBIDDEN on this site if I recall :/ so this one is a no no I apologize. This will slowly drain the enemy of said thing *stat, speed, strength, chakra, (possibly element as long as its in place?)* This makes no sense :/ You can't place the mark on a person's stats as they are not tangible doing so will be breaking the fourth wall Also this seems to be a seal and only sealmasters can use seals
Element: Clan element Element: Darkness (not dark release) Appearance nothing really... Description: Akki is able to use all of his clan jutsu without a handseal, but some motion must be made (wave of a hand) and the jutsu must be spoken. Oragakumi still needs a single hand seal. Other jutsu that isnt a clan jutsu still needs a hand seal.
Duration: supplementary Cool Down: supplementary This is just trying to loophole into using no handsigns . I don't care if it's a clan thing, you HAVE to use handseals it's clearly stated in the rules, don't loophole out of it the only exception to this is taijutsu. So denied. I'm sorry but that's my ruling |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Thu May 05, 2011 3:53 am | |
| Okay. The line. If you think boit it, it works. Chakra drain ISNT banned. And what if I were to make it they only need one hand seal? For the mark its a simple mark. Plus I xan only mark someone evey three posts. The mark can drain someone's speed and it makes me faster. A regular.seal can make someone slower or weaker no? Then why not take it a step furtger and take what is locked away. Not arguing if you still deny ill understand. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Thu May 05, 2011 5:47 am | |
| alright i checked and you're right about the chakra drain, however i believe that is part of another kekkei; to the hyuuga i believe. How can it be a simple mark if it's used to drain a stat? As well it doesn't really address the problem stating that it transfers it to you, I just don't like the idea, it's still too op and once every three posts well, that can be the equivalent of once every five minutes :/ as well as i stated seals are seal master class exclusive
one handed signs maybe, i dunno because it used to be a wordquest and i dunno how that's gonna work now x.x; |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Thu May 05, 2011 5:57 am | |
| Its onve per three TOPICS not posts. And you could say it somewhat works like ftg. That makes it possible. And draining Chakra is sponge class. Im not draining cuz once the seal is gone all effects dusappear. Now the handseals. I know gaara had shikaku, but im using just my kkg jusu not others. But like I still have to wave my hand. I just changed the method of activation see? | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Thu May 05, 2011 7:14 am | |
| again Akki Seals are for sealmaster class I'm not commenting on this further I will look into someone else looking at your stuff as you clearly are unsatisfied with my answer who knows maybe they'll approve it, nonetheless, this is not approved as of yet |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Thu May 05, 2011 7:19 am | |
| No no no. I understand please ill stop. Im talking abohut making one hand seal with both hands. Im just lookong to fill my slots. | |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Fri May 06, 2011 12:09 pm | |
| Name: Demon's Intrusion Clan: Tenma Element: Darkness
Appearance a very thin black like mist that is hard to notice. Description: Akki is able to emit darkness from his body. This darkness will enter an enemy or living being and find information. Whether its memories or jutsu or weaknesses. This doesnt hurt the person its being done to, as a matter of fact it gives the enemy no ill effect from this move at all.
Duration: one post Cool Down: Once every two topics
Name: Dark Transfer Clan: Tenma Element: Darkness
Appearance N/A Description: Akki can instantaneously switch positions with one of his clones. It can only be done with his darkness clones and nothing else. Because they are linked in a way.
Duration: one switch Cool Down: once per topic | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Sat May 07, 2011 11:32 am | |
| Alright, Again I'm saying this is not approved I didn't want to approve or deny this as I didn't want to hurt feelings denying abilities twice in a row, but it appears I have to point out some stuff here The first ability is just a simple way to metagame :/ I don't believe it's right to have a jutsu that allows you to learn everything about the opponent I know it says that it only takes some information, but this 'some information' includes basically anything that the opponent knows and some for what they don't know as an example some people don't realize they have a weakness or a fear and you can learn of it and use it against them? Like I said just seems like a way to try and metagame. So that one is DENIED
Your second one seems more like a jutsu so please register it as such and we'll go from there. |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Sat May 07, 2011 11:38 am | |
| Hey dei, seryth has an ability like the one I have...go deny it or approve mine. | |
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Ori-san Special Jounin
TP : 0 Posts : 311 Join date : 2011-04-06 Location : bloop
Ninja Profile Main Class: Seal Master Secondary Class: Cleaner Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Tue May 17, 2011 8:10 pm | |
| It's not an ability it's a jutsu and has major repercussions. Think before you speak, thanks. Anyway, fix what was asked and we'll look at it again. | |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Tue May 17, 2011 8:14 pm | |
| ill just make 2 new ones... | |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Tue May 17, 2011 8:19 pm | |
| Name: Clan: Tenma Element: Darkness
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Name: Clan: Tenma Element: Darkness
Appearance N/A Description:
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Lord Victus Jounin
TP : 269 Posts : 946 Join date : 2011-01-04
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Tank Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Sat May 21, 2011 11:17 am | |
| Do me a favor. Take each ability and repost them in the correct category. Then get it reapproved | |
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King Z Chunin
TP : 7 Posts : 401 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 31 Location : everywhere...and yet nowhere...
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Sat May 21, 2011 11:24 am | |
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Lord Victus Jounin
TP : 269 Posts : 946 Join date : 2011-01-04
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| Subject: Re: Akki's abilities Sat May 21, 2011 11:24 am | |
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