War Release

Name: War
Clan: Gekisen
Element: Inferno (Wind + Fire)

Appearance n/a Fire?
Description: The actual true form three allows for the body to be set too flames fully, allowing the user too not take harm from any physical attack. Kunais, Explosions, Melee Strikes, etc. Only jutsu of Ninjutsu and Kinjutsu or a powered Taijutsu would be capable of harming the user of this form. However this form requires massive amounts of oxygen. It makes the user faster overall, but this is the only form that most would be able too master. This form can be used for five turns, any longer and the user will automatically pass out. This has a three turn resting period before it can be used again. Doing second degree burns if the fire hits an opponent. This gives the ability to become one with flames. The further the flames burn, the more powerful the user shall become, according to the chart below. As such, physical attacks will not work on the user, and instead of being maimed or wounded, flames would spew from the injuries. Burning, or overtaking the enemies. This is considered the Alternate, and extremely more advanced form of Blaze of Destruction, because it is able to release a flame storm with a temperature as high as 1000˚F and a radius of 15-30 meters. Making this form incredibly dangerous. It is the hardest form to master, if one has not been alive for more then at least a few years, and is not one of a Gekisen. The heat of the Flames however, is not lethal. However it works in a rather different way. It stops clones from being effective in the battle. It also harms summons, but other Ninja would only be slower, ten points slower on their speed levels, from the intense heat. The user of this form is limited too the area of the flames, and if contact from the flames is disconnected the user would instantly pass out. This is a last offensive based form, as it drains so much chakra, that when it is used, the user would be left on the brink of death after it deactivates.


Duration: 5 posts for form three. For the alternate form three form it is until he is disconnected from the flames or steps outside the area of his flames.
Cool Down: 5 for both

Seems like a ninjutsu to me mate. Not really an ability, but you are welcome to others opinions.

I'll pick this apart in sections.

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The actual true form three allows for the body to be set too flames fully, allowing the user too not take harm from any physical attack. Kunais, Explosions, Melee Strikes, etc. Only jutsu of Ninjutsu and Kinjutsu or a powered Taijutsu would be capable of harming the user of this form.

This is quite similar to Lightning Release Armour, however it deals instead with fire. This is not considered an ability.

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As such, physical attacks will not work on the user, and instead of being maimed or wounded, flames would spew from the injuries. Burning, or overtaking the enemies. This is considered the Alternate, and extremely more advanced form of Blaze of Destruction, because it is able to release a flame storm with a temperature as high as 5100˚C and a radius of 250 meters.

I'm not sure if you understand how hot that is, 5100 degrees Celsius is entirely devastating. That's roughly the temperature of the earth's core, if you used this, it would set the atmosphere on fire, and destroy everything, you'd even kill yourself with something that hot. Not only that, but anything within the vicinity of something this hot will be incinerated. There is no dodging something like this, and the range of 250 meters is completely insane. To fix this, make the temperature more like 1000 Degrees Fahrenheit. Reduce the range to 15-30 meters at the most.

As stated above, this part is more of a jutsu than an ability, so I would like this edited, please make it into an ability.

Kazumi wrote:

I'll pick this apart in sections.

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The actual true form three allows for the body to be set too flames fully, allowing the user too not take harm from any physical attack. Kunais, Explosions, Melee Strikes, etc. Only jutsu of Ninjutsu and Kinjutsu or a powered Taijutsu would be capable of harming the user of this form.

This is quite similar to Lightning Release Armour, however it deals instead with fire. This is not considered an ability.

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As such, physical attacks will not work on the user, and instead of being maimed or wounded, flames would spew from the injuries. Burning, or overtaking the enemies. This is considered the Alternate, and extremely more advanced form of Blaze of Destruction, because it is able to release a flame storm with a temperature as high as 5100˚C and a radius of 250 meters.

I'm not sure if you understand how hot that is, 5100 degrees Celsius is entirely devastating. That's roughly the temperature of the earth's core, if you used this, it would set the atmosphere on fire, and destroy everything, you'd even kill yourself with something that hot. Not only that, but anything within the vicinity of something this hot will be incinerated. There is no dodging something like this, and the range of 250 meters is completely insane. To fix this, make the temperature more like 1000 Degrees Fahrenheit. Reduce the range to 15-30 meters at the most.

As stated above, this part is more of a jutsu than an ability, so I would like this edited, please make it into an ability.

To the first bit where you say sounded more like LRA, it actually doesn't. When I use this ability in its first stage but body actually becomes fire. Which explains why i can't be hurt but at the same time am not invulnerable. Also I have reduced the range and temperature. The reason its an ability is because it stops clones from being effective in battle and harms summons periodically which forces them to retreat.

1000 degress Celsius is still too hot. Reduce it to Fahrenheit.

Woah, sorry bout that. Edited.