Alvero Senju
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 | | Subject: Jiro's abilities (Done) Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:38 pm | |
| Name: Jiro Uchiha Clan: Uchiha Element: Fire Appearance:  Description:A special type of Sharingan known as the Leaf Sharingan. It's called this for a few reasons, namely being that it's green and that the user can only attain it through being loyal to Konoha in general, not just to their clan. This Sharingan will grow stronger depending on how many Tomoe the user has. If they have one Tomoe, it can trace speed as well as a one Tomoe Sharingan can, if they have two, it traces as fast as a 2nd Tomoe would, etc. Duration:7 posts Cool Down:5 posts
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Alvero Senju
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| | Subject: Re: Jiro's abilities (Done) Sat Apr 23, 2011 10:40 pm | |
| Alright, I edited the entire ability in general to a new concept. Anyway, waiting for approval. | |
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Xin Li
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| | Subject: Re: Jiro's abilities (Done) Sat Apr 23, 2011 10:54 pm | |
| Remove the speed, endurance, and strenght. The Sharingan is an optical ability. The ehancement of an eye would do no such thing mate. The tracking ability is fine though | |
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Alvero Senju
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| | Subject: Re: Jiro's abilities (Done) Sat Apr 23, 2011 10:56 pm | |
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Xin Li
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| | Subject: Re: Jiro's abilities (Done) Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:05 pm | |
| Cut your Duration to 6-7, and drop your cool down to 5. | |
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Alvero Senju
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| | Subject: Re: Jiro's abilities (Done) Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:07 pm | |
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Xin Li
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| | Subject: Re: Jiro's abilities (Done) Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:16 pm | |
| Nah. You're good.
Approved. | |
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