Uson's First Ability

Name:Gentle Fist Fulll Body Armor
Clan:Hyuuga
Element:

Appearance An Aura of invisble chakra to regular eyes. (As all non elemental chakra is invisble)
Description:Uson has figured out a way to manipulate his chakra futher through the princpals of Jyuuken. In order to activate this ability Uson must first preform the Eight Trigrams Heavenly Spin. As the heavenly spin requires a spinning motion and chakra pouring from 361 tenketsu it requres advance chakra control. Once Uson finishes spinning his body will make an endeavour to re-absorb some of his expelled chakra from his Kaiten technique. By doing this Uson's body is possesed by a the remaning chakra used from the previous technque with a sort of engerzied hyper form. This temporaly shell of chakra grants Uson nearly the same benifits of the Kaiten technque excluding the need for spinning, while also losing the repel, and knock back effects of the post kaiten. As such this short-lived shell increases Uson movement, and attack speed while also granting him some high defense. However the downside to this ability is he must always use Kaiten first in order to be granted this short lived enhancement.
Duration:2 post
Cool Down: 6 post

It does one thing. It is an armor(which will require some tweaking), or it increases your movement/attack speed. Not both. o.o

You also compare this to Hakkeshō Kaiten, without the rotation. Which is impossible.

Narutopedia wrote:

This jutsu is only effective when rotating, since the chakra itself is not enough to stop a physical attack thus if they cannot rotate, the user becomes vulnerable.

Read the bolded.

And I bring this up last, as I am not entirely sure. Abilities(to my knowledge) must be related to your Kekkei Genkai, and as yours is a doujutsu, I think it may have to be eye-related. Not sure on this.

Alright, thanks for taking time to reivew my ability.
Okay that being said lets go.

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It does one thing. It is an armor(which will require some tweaking), or it increases your movement/attack speed. Not both. o.o

Why are you trying to jip me? I mean I personally feel like you're trying to jip me man.

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This helps increase his brains reaction time, to a point that his reflexes are upped and he has quite a remarkable increase in speed. Allowing his body to better keep up with what his eyes track.

Doesn't your ability do more than one thing? It increases the prective ablites of the Sharingan, your reflex speed, and body movement speed. Not here detabe the differnces, but as you see. I think I can have both.

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And I bring this up last, as I am not entirely sure. Abilities(to my knowledge) must be related to your Kekkei Genkai, and as yours is a doujutsu, I think it may have to be eye-related. Not sure on this.

There is no rule that states this. If there is post it here. I know the abilites can be clan based,but anyway mine is Jyuuken, a sub tech of Hyuuga

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You also compare this to Hakkeshō Kaiten, without the rotation. Which is impossible

Naruto wikai, thanks for pointing that out. But it's not entirely true. Fan made shit can be annoying at times.

http://manga.animea.net/naruto-chapter-195-page-3.html

There click that. After you see page 3-4 It is proven chakra can be used to block, and alter. He wasn't spinning, and for him to even use solid chakra to alter/parry the item it proves yes indeed it can be done. As Manga Evidience --> Naruto Wika.

One thing i think you should know

That if your gonna be putting out chakra from all of your points effectively your entire body, then it would mean that as long as your using the jutsu your chakra will be constantly pumping it out. Which to me seems like a huge and unfair trade off, but it also weakens your attack power. I think this would be a dangerous jutsu for YOU to use, as such i think you should lower the use to 2, as well as the cool down to 5.

^ do the above and I can get behind it and approve it

What would you suggest? I mean the rotation is blasting 361 points from ones body. I was attempting to condence this with advance chakra control. I'm open for suggestions though.

Edit:I have modified it, and tweaked this ability.

Essentially its a speed and defense amplifier?

Yes.

APPROVED

I need this to be approved again.

Approved.