Jana Chunin
TP : 15 Posts : 172 Join date : 2011-03-12
Ninja Profile Main Class: Berserker Secondary Class: Assassin Sensei: n/a
| Subject: Demon Byakugan Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:40 am | |
| Name: Byakugan Clan: Hyūga Element: Electricity Appearance: - They normally Hyuga members have their eyeballs like shown but Jana's eyes change into this form (but it is completely red) when she activates the byakugon.:
Description: While she can not read chakra of the user yet she can then use "Demon Byakugan." It is where the user can summon up the regular Byakugan but with red eyes the user can embody the element of lightning to their attacks. Once activated the time slot of this ability is duration of 5 and cool down of 3. When hit with this attack, even if it isn't a chakra node, the electricity targets the muscles and can cause central bruising (A black spot appears where hit the first time) but if hit twice in the same bruised area (roughly 6 inch diameter) the bones will break in that area. Is this is used twice in one thread, unless you are a jounin because then it is 4, the user will have both arms broken into shrapnol. It will take 5 IC posts to regenerate the bones with a medic, no matter what rank the medic is. Duration: 5 Cool Down: 3 (Can only be used 2 times in one thread) - Once a Jounin:
Duration: 10 Cool Down: 6
Last edited by Jana on Sat Jun 04, 2011 8:59 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
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Kyouki Jounin
TP : 85 Posts : 376 Join date : 2011-04-24 Age : 28 Location : Tennessee Q-Q
Ninja Profile Main Class: Tank Secondary Class: Medical Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Demon Byakugan Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:03 pm | |
| Actually...This is two abilities.
You need to choose one or the other. x-x | |
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Jana Chunin
TP : 15 Posts : 172 Join date : 2011-03-12
Ninja Profile Main Class: Berserker Secondary Class: Assassin Sensei: n/a
| Subject: Re: Demon Byakugan Sat Jun 04, 2011 8:06 pm | |
| Ok, I have edited it to where it is just one ability. Please note that it advances, much like how my Jojo's first ability was approved while also being an advancement ability through rank, to a jounin leveled rank which is basicly multiplied by two for everything once Jounin rank is achieved. | |
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Dante Legendary Sannin
TP : 0 Posts : 784 Join date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : USA
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Illusionary Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Demon Byakugan Sat Jun 04, 2011 8:57 pm | |
| Hmm okay this is reminding of Soifon's marked killing but obviously yours doesn't kill. My thing would be, add in something that will physically show on the targeted area after the first hit. | |
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Jana Chunin
TP : 15 Posts : 172 Join date : 2011-03-12
Ninja Profile Main Class: Berserker Secondary Class: Assassin Sensei: n/a
| Subject: Re: Demon Byakugan Sat Jun 04, 2011 9:00 pm | |
| Ok, I did forget that bit. I edited in though. Black spot is the bruising area while also being the effected area. Will that work? | |
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Dante Legendary Sannin
TP : 0 Posts : 784 Join date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : USA
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Illusionary Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Demon Byakugan Sat Jun 04, 2011 9:04 pm | |
| Yeah that works, Approved. | |
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