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Opal
Genin
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Posts : 64
Join date : 2011-05-24
| | Subject: swift Release Tue May 31, 2011 6:30 am | |
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Dante
Legendary Sannin
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Posts : 784
Join date : 2011-01-10
Age : 31
Location : USA
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Main Class: Assassin
Secondary Class: Illusionary
Sensei: N/A
| | Subject: Re: swift Release Tue May 31, 2011 1:16 pm | |
| Okay, this just confused me. Can you explain it to me with maybe some examples  | |
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Opal
Genin
TP : 10
Posts : 64
Join date : 2011-05-24
| | Subject: Re: swift Release Tue May 31, 2011 7:30 pm | |
| 'Kay swift release is a combination of two chakras lightning and wind. the point of the release is to improve the users speed and reflexes the wind element propels the user at body flicker speed's and the lightning element improves the reflexes to an inhuman speed running, blocking, punching, kicking e.g. at higher levels sonic booms may be produced by the user A rank S rank. getting the picture now?  | |
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Opal
Genin
TP : 10
Posts : 64
Join date : 2011-05-24
| | Subject: Re: swift Release Fri Jun 03, 2011 6:35 pm | |
| Okay my char is dead but don't void this. This ability will be used for my next char | |
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Opal
Genin
TP : 10
Posts : 64
Join date : 2011-05-24
| | Subject: Re: swift Release Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:16 am | |
| forget that My char is still alive and this is ready for approval
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Suno
Genin
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Join date : 2011-01-13
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Main Class: Vanguard
Secondary Class: Tank
Sensei: Blast Cloud Kazumi
| | Subject: Re: swift Release Mon Jun 06, 2011 5:59 am | |
| Hmmmm...
Like all things swift release is an advance elemnt, and this first ability is being able to use it, as it has its own jutsu.
Yours makes it confusing..... Just say you can use swift release jutsu | |
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Opal
Genin
TP : 10
Posts : 64
Join date : 2011-05-24
| | Subject: Re: swift Release Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:00 am | |
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Spitfire
Kage
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Posts : 111
Join date : 2011-05-31
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Main Class: Vanguard
Secondary Class: Medical
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| | Subject: Re: swift Release Mon Jun 13, 2011 5:06 am | |
| No. Nah. Nope. Go to Narutowikia and take the definition of the bloodline as it is. http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Swift_ReleaseHere is the link, for your convenience. As Suno said, your first ability is simply the acquisition of the bloodline, and nothing else, if it is a bloodline that you are trying to acquire. As such, a bloodline is simply the ability to use a special technique or mutation that others cannot. Don't try to expand upon that within the same ability. Especially with a canon bloodline. | |
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Opal
Genin
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Posts : 64
Join date : 2011-05-24
| | Subject: Re: swift Release Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:58 pm | |
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Tabris
Jounin
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Posts : 281
Join date : 2011-05-02
Age : 27
Location : I don't Kiss and Tell
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Main Class: Medical
Secondary Class: Tactical
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| | Subject: Re: swift Release Fri Jun 24, 2011 5:47 pm | |
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Master Red
Bijuu
TP : 127
Posts : 492
Join date : 2011-01-10
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Main Class: Assassin
Secondary Class: Medical
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| | Subject: Re: swift Release Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:22 pm | |
| Yeah, this is denied.
Your cooldown needs to be way longer and your duration needs to be shorter. | |
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Lord Victus
Jounin
TP : 269
Posts : 946
Join date : 2011-01-04
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Main Class: Assassin
Secondary Class: Tank
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| | Subject: Re: swift Release Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:27 pm | |
| Ok wow.. sorry about this luna.
Check the chart on swift release. It is a combination of wind and either yin or yang.
Next take out the stuff about naruto and the movie and all that.
Next make your cool down longer and the duration A LOT shorter. You are bursting a large amount of chakra out of your body to repeal you foward at high speeds. So one or two post at the most and a large cool down.
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Opal
Genin
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Posts : 64
Join date : 2011-05-24
| | Subject: Re: swift Release Sun Jul 03, 2011 2:21 am | |
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