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PostSubject: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyTue May 31, 2011 6:30 am

Name: Swift Release
Clan: -
Element: Swift release

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Description: This is merely an ability this says that I have the right to use Swift release (for more details look at
http://www.narutorequiem.org/t2303-this-is-the-way-you-left
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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyTue May 31, 2011 1:16 pm

Okay, this just confused me. Can you explain it to me with maybe some examples Sad
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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyTue May 31, 2011 7:30 pm

'Kay

swift release is a combination of two chakras lightning and wind. the point of the release is to improve the users speed and reflexes the wind element propels the user at body flicker speed's and the lightning element improves the reflexes to an inhuman speed running, blocking, punching, kicking e.g. at higher levels sonic booms may be produced by the user A rank S rank. getting the picture now? Smile
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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyFri Jun 03, 2011 6:35 pm

Okay my char is dead but don't void this. This ability will be used for my next char
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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptySun Jun 05, 2011 12:16 am

forget that My char is still alive and this is ready for approval
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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyMon Jun 06, 2011 5:59 am

Hmmmm...

Like all things swift release is an advance elemnt, and this first ability is being able to use it, as it has its own jutsu.

Yours makes it confusing..... Just say you can use swift release jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyMon Jun 13, 2011 1:00 am

done
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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyMon Jun 13, 2011 5:06 am

No. Nah. Nope.

Go to Narutowikia and take the definition of the bloodline as it is. http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Swift_Release
Here is the link, for your convenience.

As Suno said, your first ability is simply the acquisition of the bloodline, and nothing else, if it is a bloodline that you are trying to acquire. As such, a bloodline is simply the ability to use a special technique or mutation that others cannot. Don't try to expand upon that within the same ability. Especially with a canon bloodline.
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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyFri Jun 24, 2011 4:58 pm

edited

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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyFri Jun 24, 2011 5:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyThu Jun 30, 2011 9:22 pm

Yeah, this is denied.
Your cooldown needs to be way longer and your duration needs to be shorter.
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PostSubject: Re: swift Release    swift Release  EmptyThu Jun 30, 2011 9:27 pm

Ok wow.. sorry about this luna.

Check the chart on swift release. It is a combination of wind and either yin or yang.

Next take out the stuff about naruto and the movie and all that.

Next make your cool down longer and the duration A LOT shorter. You are bursting a large amount of chakra out of your body to repeal you foward at high speeds. So one or two post at the most and a large cool down.

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