Drake Chunin
TP : 0 Posts : 544 Join date : 2011-02-25
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Tank Sensei:
| Subject: First ability Mon May 30, 2011 2:49 pm | |
| Name: Oblivion Flames Clan: Gekisen Element: Inferno (Wind + Fire)
Appearance Any part of his body will be covered in bright purple flames. Description: They will burn the target instantly. Causing fourth degree burns against anything that it touches. The flames take the form of whatever weapon Drake has in his mind. It is an ultimate ability. One that the gekisen labeled forbidden. It is, just like the rest of Drake's abilities, a giant chakra consumer. However this one has a leech like quality. It steals the chakra of another and feeds it back to Drake. The only downside to this, is that when it is used to hit a target, it will consume everything. If this jutsu is used past his own limits then he will face the danger of being consumed by his own flames. The target after being struck will die after ten posts if the affected area is not purged of the flames.
Duration: n/a Cool Down: n/a
Last edited by Drake on Mon May 30, 2011 4:12 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: First ability Mon May 30, 2011 3:37 pm | |
| Judgment: PENDING
Alrighty, down to business.
1. I do believe that you only get one thing per ability, which means that you choose to have it cause fourth degree burns on whatever it touches or the leech effect.
2. The ability is extremely powerful for just being a giant Chakra Consumer. I'm going to need another Drawback to the ability. Maybe, a Short Duration and shit. I don't care. Just make it something that makes it rather annoying to use it more then once. |
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Drake Chunin
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Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Tank Sensei:
| Subject: Re: First ability Mon May 30, 2011 4:11 pm | |
| Edited. The fourth degree burns happen from the flames since all flames burn but after a number of posts the flames consume you fully. If you don't get rid of the flames on the affected area you die. The leech ability is rather a special affect of this ability besides just the raw potential to burn objects. | |
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Drake Chunin
TP : 0 Posts : 544 Join date : 2011-02-25
Ninja Profile Main Class: Medical Secondary Class: Tank Sensei:
| Subject: Re: First ability Tue May 31, 2011 2:44 pm | |
| Nvm I was just re-registering the technique. It was already approved before the revamp. No need for this anymore. | |
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