The Last Hyuga

Personal Information~
Name: Ashi
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Village: Mist Village
Rank: Genin
Bloodline: Byakugan
Main Class: Tank
Secondary Class Summoner


Appearance and Personality~
Picture OR description:
On his forearms he bears sealing tattoos that allows him to seal weapons then fire them.


Personality: Ashi has a very powerful and overwhelming personality. He has a strong presence when people meet him. He always speaks his mind and has no fear of fighting. Ashi has lost his humanity long ago, from the countless battles and killing. He is proud of the name "Demon of the Mist." Even promoting it when he get the opportunity. Ashi also has a less serious side, only shown to very few people. He often makes jokes or will mess around with people, though not often. He is willing to die to protect his chosen student and make them strong at all cost. But most of all Ashi in battle truly is a Demon showing no mercy to his enemies.

He is willing to protect his village at all cost. he has undying loyalty to the Water country. He is a power house ninja who is willing to defend his people at any cost. He feels the same way about his brother. Ashi protects what he cares about and all around him know that fact. He will never mess around when it comes to his family and village. Ashi also is kind to his shinboi. He cares for them as if they were his family. He will have an occasional joke with ninja of his city. Other than that there is no time in the day for joking. He is serious about everything. He will often goes patrolling in his village for the hottest women. As well as other village's women aren't safe. He is ladies man and knows how to talk them into things. He is just a young kid mainly focused on having fun. Unless in battle when he is truly a demon of killing.


Likes: Women, Money, Swords, Rare things and killing.
Dislikes: Sand ninja, weak shinobi, speeches, long winded ninja
Hobbies: Fighting, training, doing missions, creating new things
Dreams: To be the strongest ninja in the world


Elements~


Primary Element: Water
Secondary Element: Lightning *Can't use*
Third Element: Earth *Can't use*


Justu~
E rank are free*
Jutsu(1) 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin
Jutsu(2) Water Clone
Jutsu(3) Summoning Technique
Jutsu(4) 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Jutsu(5) Camouflage technique

Weapons~
Weapon(1) Two piece Katana *One katana breaks into two separated ones.*
Weapon(2) fuma Shuriken
Weapon(3) kunai grenades
Weapon(4) Explosive Tag
Weapon(5) Custom Shurkien

Spoiler:

History: Pre Academy and Academy


Ashi was born in the Village Hidden in the Mist. He was raised by his biological father Si-shen Momochi a Legendary Mist Swordsmen known throughout the ninja world. His father love Ashi and didn't want to tell Ashi the truth about his birth. So he told him his mother died in child birth but she loved him. Ashi was raised to learn how to fight with the sword and be a proper ninja. But Si-Shen knew that Ashi was something amazing. Ashi had special eyes bearing the Byakugan. But at a young age Ashi was trained and discovered to be a genius. They each held two iron swords in their training ground. Si-shen attempting to teach his son a lesson on the importance of a good stance, purposely he hit his son; cracking one of his son’s ribs. Ashi having Si-shen’s mighty temper got furious and lunged at his father. Only being 5 he still was able to swing with great rage and skill beyond his years. He father seeing the rage and skill, need he had great potential to become the greatest ninja swordsmen of his time. But he also realized that Ashi was something else, that he held something special. So Si-shen began to search through text about the eyes that his son bore and received from his mother.

After months of searching his father found another man who called himself a gentle fist style master. With a single picture of the man who claimed to haves god’s eyes; they were the same as Ashi’s. He lived just outside of kiri and was a missing ninja from the Leaf. This man out of a favor to the mist village, would give Ashi's father study guides. He would hand write texts would help Ashi train. The text explain his jutsu, taijutsu and even weapons; including how he used advanced chakra control to attack. From this point his father began to figure out how to train his son. But his father was constantly leaving the village to handle countless missions. So any spare time he had a friend and wielder of the Byakugan Ao, to train help train his son's Byakugan. Si-shen was happy to do it because he loved Ashi and wanted his legacy to live on. So he showed Ashi how to use his powers and ninjutsu. He excelled and began to learn it on his own, slowly developing his powers. With the master of many techniques beyond his age, he graduated the ninja Academy at the amazing age of 8. But at the genin when a chunin exams where held in Kiri, Ashi found a love for puppetry techniques. He befriended this puppet ninja and was allowed to watch him train for his chunin exams. This is when Ashi would remember every movement and develop his own skills with it.


Genin


After the academy and became a official genin in the Village Hidden in the Mist. He went on a few minor missions, as well as continued to learn about his Kekkei Genkai. When Ashi became a genin he was told of his birth. Ashi’s mother was a young woman his father met while on a mission to the Leaf village; she was a profession whore. Who slept with many powerful men. Though his father and mother did it out chemistry they had. As one of Si-shen’s codes are to never pay for sex. After that his father left and went back to the Mist as he was a bachelor and that would never change. Ten months later he was back in the Leaf area for a mission. So his father thinking that he could get at least one more night of a good time out of this harlot. He went to the women’s home. She was at her home with 3 kids; a five year old, a three year old and a one month old. Ashi's father was shock to see the children. Then curiosity hitting him looked down at the baby who had white hair, like Si-shen’s. It had the women’s natural white eyes. But the face, eyes and skin tone matched Si-Shen’s. At that point his father realized that the child was his. As only a member of the Momochi clan could posses such features. But his father didn't say anything, because he didn't want to strike out with her. So that night a few hours after she had fallen asleep his father made his move. Using his master of the Silent Blade got dressed and made it to Ashi's crib. But as he lifted the baby an invisible string of bells rang out. The women launched into the room hold a kunai; looking ferocious at Ashi's father, Si-shen Momochi. The women bore full Byakugan her viens bulging. She then screamed at the top of her lungs to drop he son. But Si-shen refused, he would start a war between the two villages before he did that. Using his mastery of the sword, his father making two quick swipes to cut the kunai in half and put the blade to her throat. Explaining that if she ever came to look for this child he would kill her and all of her bastard children. Jumping back and with a release of hidden Mist jutsu Ashi left the Leaf with Ashi in his arms, still silently sleeping.

After that Ashi was shocked to find out the truth. But being raised by his father a professional bachelor it didn't surprise him. Ashi's father gave Ashia picture of his mother if he ever wanted it. But Ashi just tore it up and threw it out the window. He loved his dad and that’s all he needed in his life. After that dad Ashi knew he would be happy being a bachelor for the rest of his life. But Si-shen needed to leave his son again and Ashi needed to leave for his mission; so he gave his son another scroll for him the last one Si-Shen had for him to study. Inside of it was the final secret technique about their KG.

Remove Fire from the clan's element. Katon isn't a clan elment. It should be in primary.

Are you adding history? If, not I'll be grading your app with a 1/5

You're not graduating at age 9. Make yourself 11 at the minimum.

OK I changed my elements.

I added a history, I didn't put it in just cuz it was optional. I didn't know that I would be graded haha.

Ummm... Itachi graduated at 9 so thats what I went with for the sake of just joining the chunin exam in time I changed it.

Itachi graduated at age 7, and even so you're not Itachi. History is optional, but it helps your overall grade of the app. You're supposed to be be graded on everything, but as you had no history, you didn't tell how you lived through the Uchiha massacare.

You're not a Chunin, and You're not getting the Sharingan at start up. You must earn the totems IC

Remove all of your jutsu and weapons until you get your first approval.

edit for Hyuga since there is an opening on the list.

What is a Jidanda?
And explain how you have Shuriken sealed in your arm? Do you have some kind of tattoo for that?
Oh, and you can't have the 64 Palms.

edit and Jidanda is a cannon weapon like a large Mace ball with explosive tags.

Wow, no loop holing this one. No "Scroll with 20 Kunai"

oh I didn't realize that was a loop hole. I just thought it was like Tenten.


EDIT: edited weapons anyway

After months of searching his father found text on a man who called himself a gentle fist style master. With a single picture of the man who claimed to haves god’s eyes; they were the same as Hakai’s. The text explain his jutsu, taijutsu and even weapons; including how he used advanced chakra control to attack. From this point his father began to figure out how to train his son. But his father was constantly leaving the village to handle countless missions. So any spare time he wrote text explaining how to train this strange power his son had known as the Byakugan.

No Hyuuga Clan Member is going to tell it's secerts to a ninja from a differnt village period. Gentle Fist is known in Konoha, not Kiri. Even so what the hell is this text shit I am curious.

Even so you're contradictiong yourself. You say you were born in Kiri, but your history as you go down says your father took you from your mother. All Hyuuga Reside in the Hyuuga compound. For your father to even be on the Hyuuga clan's residence is bullshit. The Hyuuga clan are a strict, and secertive clan. Even, if your father tired to learn this stuff to teach you it, wouldn't work. He isn't trained in the gentle fist arts, and wouldn't learn shit from just reading a damn text message with no prior training.

By the way are you a Hyuuga or Uchiha? Your name is still Uchiha.

Again. You're not Itachi, You're not Might Guy, You're not Kakashi, you're not Asuma. For you to graduate at age 8 from the Academy it isn't realistic. They graduated during the times of war.

Once again. You didn't take the Chunin exams, nor did you pass. I'm to tired to argue with you right now. Fix, and alter your profile PLEASE. Once you do this I will show, or tell you what else isn't correct.

Bonten wrote:

After months of searching his father found text on a man who called himself a gentle fist style master. With a single picture of the man who claimed to haves god’s eyes; they were the same as Hakai’s. The text explain his jutsu, taijutsu and even weapons; including how he used advanced chakra control to attack. From this point his father began to figure out how to train his son. But his father was constantly leaving the village to handle countless missions. So any spare time he wrote text explaining how to train this strange power his son had known as the Byakugan.

No Hyuuga Clan Member is going to tell it's secerts to a ninja from a differnt village period. Gentle Fist is known in Konoha, not Kiri. Even so what the hell is this text shit I am curious.

Even so you're contradictiong yourself. You say you were born in Kiri, but your history as you go down says your father took you from your mother. All Hyuuga Reside in the Hyuuga compound. For your father to even be on the Hyuuga clan's residence is bullshit.

By the way are you a Hyuuga or Uchiha? Your name is still Uchiha.

Again. You're not Itachi, You're not Might Guy, You're not Kakashi, you're not Asuma. For you to graduate at age 8 from the Academy it isn't realistic. They graduated during the times of war.

Once again. You didn't take the Chunin exams, nor did you pass. I'm to tired to argue with you right now. Fix, and alter your profile PLEASE. Once you do this I will show, or tell you what else isn't correct.

Lol you might want to look at the rp there are approved genin hyuga's inside of Kiri. The text was info on the hyugas, they are a famous clan there would be plenty of information upon the hyugas. Like neji who was able to master gentle fist on his own so has mine. Yes I said I was born in the Kiri, because that is why my char will say. My exact birth isn't important to him, he is a mist ninja.

Now my name ya thats is a mistake. I am changing the first name as well as I have a custom character to use. Ya I forgot to edit that from my app, why would I want to be a genin who is graduated at 8. But took 3 years to do the chunin exam.


Also where does it say I am a chunin?? MY APP SAYS RANK: GENIN. lol fail much? haha

I will make some edits now.

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He then went to the chunin exam at 10 after another year of training. He went onto dominate the exams and bring great honor to the Mist village and his father.

Says it right there.

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Lol you might want to look at the rp there are approved genin hyuga's inside of Kiri.

There are also people who have B rank jutsu. I became a mod yesterday, and shit like that I couldn't do anything about it, but I can now. Also take note that they have explained there origions.

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The text was info on the hyugas, they are a famous clan there would be plenty of information upon the hyugas. Like neji who was able to master gentle fist on his own so has mine

Again, they are a famous secertive clan. Even Orochimaru gave information to Kidomaru about Jyuuken, but even then he knew nothing of the Hyuug clan technqiues. Also you're not Neji, where as he lived in the Hyuuga compound, and saw his uncle use these technques. You did not. Once more I'll say it again. No Hyuuga, or even ninja are going to out right tell a ninja from a differnt village their techs.

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I forgot to edit that from my app, why would I want to be a genin who is graduated at 8. But took 3 years to do the chunin exam

Again, you didn't take the Chunin exams, what don't you understand? Once you graduate from the Academy you're a genin. That not logical that you've graduated at age 8. These aren't times of war. You're trying to indicate that you're a genius, but even then you'd graduate at age 11-12. That's how it is shown in the manga.

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Also where does it say I am a chunin?? MY APP SAYS RANK: GENIN. lol fail much? haha

Look above at my qoute or re-read your history. Now again please quit arguing with me and do what was asked.

LMAO so instead of saying you have a mistake in my history. You someone how ignored the Rank section where I put genin. The fact that I ended my history as a genin. As well as stated in the C box and in here I am planning on doing the chunin exams you ignored that. wow

Also I explained my origins. (That is how it is correctly spelled) Clearly in my history and neji was never shown any techniques from his uncle. He learned them on his by himself as a genin. While my character in history had an extremely experienced shinboi teaching him. It is clear that the Mist has some knowledge of the byuakugan from various wars. As seen through cannon shinboi such as, Ao. It would not be hard for one to find information about their abilities.

Anyway like I said I was editing, edits were made. The history isn't even a must, its optional. Also there is no where in the rules on the site, that it says I can't be a hyuga in the Mist. So your person preference mean absolutely nothing and you being a mod for only two days is quite clear. Certainly shown by how easily flustered by small things. haha

Do me a favor and change your history some. You need to edit the part about finding it out in the open like that; either put that you bumped into him or he found you somehow. Also make sure that there is nothing involving the Chuunin exams in your history.
Also, you're only allowed one of each weapon that you want so edit that.

OK Ya I edited my history. The reason it had that stuff in there at all is this was originally a S rank SSM char. So I had to edit ti to fit. But I think its done.


For the weapons... I thought I was allowed to have some so long as they were in moderation.

Nah, it's one of each thing.

I get one kunai, shuriken, ect?

Exactly

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approved at 3/5

OK I asked you I think 10 times in the C box. But you never gave me a reason why I you gave me 3/5. I have looked at other apps including yours. The apps are nearly exactly the same, I filled out everything in the template. If you want me to add a bunch of random info that won't effect IC actions. For example a likes and dislikes section even though its not in the template I will. But as that I filled out everything in the template the grading makes no sense. Why should the be different and I be given less points for just filling out the template. Not adding random info to the app which isn't requested. Which is why I ask again why was I given a 3/5 and not a 5/5?

I added a likes/dislike, increased my personality. I mean its basically a bunch of random info, that really won't have much control on IC info. But anything to make you happen even you haven't responded. I will still wait for a reason if there is one.

edit: Actually 4/5 looking at it for a 2nd time.

This is far better than a 3/5 not to mention the amount of effort he has put in to make sure he fit the guidelines of the site. I would give him a 4/5 and no less. Hell I'd say this is 5/5

THANK YOU! I even looked at other apps he approved and gave for 5/5, they did hardly anything better. Its was completely bias, because of what I said to Devin about staff in the C box. When he complain about people not getting work done. I said "If they aren't doing their job remove them." So they got pissed off. But its whatever.. just said that staff have to be so petty.

Can I be moved to approved.