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Tzura Chunin
TP : 0 Posts : 220 Join date : 2011-03-26
Ninja Profile Main Class: Sensor Secondary Class: Assassin Sensei:
| Subject: Kazuma Bloodline Sat Mar 26, 2011 9:11 pm | |
| Surname: Kazuma
Clan Classification: Elemental Manipulation
Kekkei Genkai name: Daiyamondo no dansu (Dance of the Diamonds)
Clan History: Because Tzura was born to a man of Earth and a woman of the Sand, he was given a rare combination of elements; Earth and Wind. When he or his descendants use those elementas at the same time, they are able to convert the carbon in solid objects (Not including humans or animals) into diamond. But once the diamond is formed, the clan member will be able to use it for projectiles, weapons, shields, or even armor.
Even though he is the only person with these abilities, they are able to be passed to others who may be direct, or indirect descendants of him.
Kekkei Genkai Information/Description: As described above, the user of this bloodline will be able to draw the carbon from anything on the earth but water, humans, and animals and form it into weapons, projectiles, shields, and armor.
When the user decides on a change in attack style, instead of spending more time on drawing extra carbon to form more diamond they can instead use the diamond previously formed and use it for something else. On the other hand when they use existing diamond the cooldowns are much longer (to make things fair).
Unlike the Crystal Release, the Diamond is unable to form over people or objects down to a cellular level which means if someone were to be trapped, the structure collapsing around them would do nothing more free them. Also, the user of this particular technique can be drained very quickly because diamond is a difficult substance to draw without enough time. Since diamond is a much harder and stronger material than crystal it cannot use water, wind, fire, or lightning as a medium due to the lack of carbon. If the user were to be distracted, attacked, or knocked of balance during the channel time, the potential diamond would be nothing more than graphite. Because of the large amounts of focus needed to channel diamond properly, they are extremely vulnerable when creating large scale attacks.
In a pinch the user is able to draw the carbon from their breath, removing the 'carbon' element from Carbon Dioxide and use it to their advantage although the result would be something on the molecular level.
Jutsu:
~Name~: Daiyamandoama Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Earth Description:The user forms a thin layer of diamond on their skin. It lasts until it is broken by a tremendous amount of blunt trauma. Because of complications with the body overheating, this forces the user to disperse the diamond after 4 posts. (3 post cooldown)
~Name~:Daiyamondoburēdo Type: Ninjutsu/ Kenjutsu Rank:b Element: Earth Description:Uses the diamond to form a sword, it can also be used as a primary coating on an already existing blade. This coat makes the blade much more resistant to strikes because diamond is one of the hardest materials known to man and steel cannot cut through it.(3 post cooldown)
~Name~:Saigo no Koe Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Wind Description: If there is already some form of diamond being used by the manipulator it is dispersed into dust which is small enough to be inhaled and can only be seen if there is enough light to create a glitter. The way Tzura gets the person to inhale the dust is by slowly releasing small bits during up close confrontations and he will even go so far as to release it all in one are and lure them through it.(5 post cooldown)
~Name~:Daiyamondo-dama Type: Ninjutsu Rank: s Element: Earth Description: The diamond inhaled by the opponent from the Diamond Dust within the air is collected in the lungs or veins to form small spheres that can impede breathing or stop blood flow by blocking veins and arteries. For added assurance of the death of their opponent, or if they become too annoyed by the duration they can either make the diamonds erupt from their skin or fire from their bodies. (6 post cooldown)
~Name~:Daiyamondo hari Type: Ninutsu Rank: b Element: Wind/ Earth Description:Similar to the Diamond sphere except they can only be used from the outside and can pierce the skin. Once inside they can be dispersed into dust and allow the user to attack with the internal spheres. (2 post cooldown)
Limitations: 1.) Due to the time it takes to collect the carbon from minerals, the window for using the Kekkei Genkai efficiently is relatively small.
2.) This bloodline is strong, as a result when a technique is used it has a minimum 2 post cooldown
3.) Diamond is extremely hard and cannot be cut by conventional weaponry, and because it is a form of mineral it's resistant to lightning. But when it comes to fire or extreme heat, there is no way for the user of diamond armor to sweat and as a result they will cook from the inside out. So fire is essentially its weakness.
4.) Diamond armor is hard, but not indestructible. Extreme amounts of blunt force trauma is enough to break the armor around the striking point off of their bodies.
Last edited by Tzura on Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:50 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
| | | J-Dub Genin
TP : 0 Posts : 86 Join date : 2011-01-25 Age : 29
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Kazuma Bloodline Sat Mar 26, 2011 11:23 pm | |
| - Noctis wrote:
- ~Name~:
Type: Rank: Element: Description:
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[u][b]~Name~:[/b][/u] [b][u]Type[/b][/u] [u][b]Rank:[/b][/u] [u][b]Element:[/b][/u] [u][b][size=15][color=red]Description:[/color][/b][/u][/size] 1. please use this for your jutsu 2. this is more of an ability then a bloodline because it only pertains to you and your the first one in your family to have this & 3.there is already crystal clan and this is basicly the samthing exept in a diffrent mineral so could you some how make it diffrent in any way other wise i would have to deny this | |
| | | Tzura Chunin
TP : 0 Posts : 220 Join date : 2011-03-26
Ninja Profile Main Class: Sensor Secondary Class: Assassin Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Kazuma Bloodline Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:05 am | |
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| | | J-Dub Genin
TP : 0 Posts : 86 Join date : 2011-01-25 Age : 29
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Kazuma Bloodline Sun Mar 27, 2011 11:03 am | |
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[u][b]~Name~:[/b][/u] [b][u]Type[/b][/u] [u][b]Rank:[/b][/u] [u][b]Element:[/b][/u] [u][b][size=15][color=red]Description:[/color][/b][/u][/size] please change you jutsu's to this format | |
| | | Tzura Chunin
TP : 0 Posts : 220 Join date : 2011-03-26
Ninja Profile Main Class: Sensor Secondary Class: Assassin Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Kazuma Bloodline Sun Mar 27, 2011 11:57 am | |
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| | | J-Dub Genin
TP : 0 Posts : 86 Join date : 2011-01-25 Age : 29
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Kazuma Bloodline Sun Mar 27, 2011 12:03 pm | |
| 1/2 approved i like how it is lesser then crytal but still as effective but i am going to change the rankes because the ranks are a little more higher then what you have them set at | |
| | | Master Red Bijuu
TP : 127 Posts : 492 Join date : 2011-01-10
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Medical Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Kazuma Bloodline Sun Mar 27, 2011 2:41 pm | |
| I need you to change the Types of the Jutsu; Armor, Attack, Build, and Weapons are not proper types. The types that you would be looking for are Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Fuinjutsu and so on and so forth. http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Jutsu#Main_Jutsu_Types1st Technique: I need a limit on how long you get to use this technique, cause you could just go around using it for however you want and that's a "no-no". I also need to know if there are any other benefits to this technique. 2nd Technique: Explain what the dust does for weapons cause for all you're saying is that it gives it a fancy look. I also need a better description of the technique like where you pull the dust from and whatnot. 3rd Technique: More description; explain what it does to the person that inhales it and how you get it over to the person. 4th Technique: This technique contradicts with the description of your ability. - Quote :
- As described above, the user of this bloodline will be able to draw the carbon from anything on the earth but water, humans, and animals and form it into weapons, projectiles, shields, and armor.
You might wanna fix this up. 5th Technique: Once again, more of a description. | |
| | | Tzura Chunin
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| Subject: Re: Kazuma Bloodline Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:50 pm | |
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| | | Master Red Bijuu
TP : 127 Posts : 492 Join date : 2011-01-10
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Medical Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Kazuma Bloodline Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:39 pm | |
| Alright, unless someone else sees something wrong with this I'll give it the 2/2 approval. | |
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