Akki Tenma (custom jutsu)

Name: Lightning Step
Rank: D-Rank
User: Akki Tenma
Element: Lightning
Description:
Tanoth focuses lightning chakra into feet to increase speed
temporarily, leaving behind a trail of purple sparks 3 feet long that
can do minor damage with the right circumstances.

Name: shockwave
Rank: C-Rank
User: Akki Tenma
Element: Lightning
Description:
user shoots out a blast of energy that is electrically charged. the
closer the hit the stronger and more refined. the farther the hit it is
weaker but wider.

Name: arc wielder
Rank: A-Rank
User: Akki Tenma
Element: Lightning
Description:
release a narrow shot of lightning from hands or control a steady
stream of lightning and move it using hand motions. If lightning hits
someone and someone is close it CAN bounce to next person THIS IS ONLY USABLE AT JOUNIN LEVEL. (more
bounces and longer lasting as character strengthens)

Name: Lightning Release: Lightning Dragon Inner Shock
Rank: A -Rank
User: Akki Tenma
Element: Lightning
Description: raiton energy surrounds him forming the shape of a dragon without legs. It evens out as it reaches the ground and heads for the enemy, either circling around or heading straight for the enemy. The drawback to this is if Tanoth is hit while forming hand signs his chakra is wasted and he has to start over.
Name: Reign
Rank: C-Rank
User: Tanoth Rensa
Element: Lightning
Description: The user emanates electrical energy from their hands. This is used as falling from a high place to greatly slow the descent and to move around slightly side to side but keep the same direction in speed or slow down while in mid-air (like a glide/hover) this prohibits the use of all jutsu requiring a hand sign (which would leave me with kkg) until this jutsu is canceled.

Name: Lightning grenade
Rank: C-Rank
User: Akki Tenma
Element: Lightning
Description: user creates a concentrated ball of electricity in their hand that they throw. it sticks to someone or something and releases a burst of electrical energy (can hold to decrease detonation time), When the the grenade goes off it only does electrical energy, expanding outward like an explosion.

Name: Pulse
Rank: B -Rank
User: Akki Tenma
Element: Lightning
Description: user creates a field of electrical energy around body, forming a quick barrier. the stronger the attack more chakra is needed to fully block it. The field is only three inches longer than the largest diammeter of his body.

Name: Crank
Rank: B-Rank
User: Akki Tenma
Element: Lightning
Description: user charges there electric chakra for a temporary boost. Allowing them to combine lightning with weapons and other attacks; enhance Taijutsu and certain Ninjutsu. Slightly increasing their strength and defense (more chakra better effect). To evenly distribute in large amounts costs large amounts of chakra, so usually focusing crank into specific attacks is done, or minimal distribution

Kyōryoku: Shindōshūha Renda
[Collaboration: Shockwave Barrage]
Rank: C
Element: Water and Lightning
This technique is a collaboration of a Suiton and Raiton users. Firstly, the Suiton user will make a Water Clone that will run up front to the enemy and attempt to attack. This would act as a distraction for the Raiton user to flicker behind the clone, punch through it and land a shocking hit to the unsuspecting foe. Immediately after the hit the Suiton user will flicker behind the user and stab him from the back.

Name: Cracking liquid
Rank: C
Element: Suiton and Raiton
This technique involves a suiton and raiton user. The suiton forms long tendrils of water, controlling there movement, then the raiton user electrifies the tendrils, making an electric whip-like move.

Name: Torrential Burst
Rank: B
Element: Suiton and Raiton
This technique involves a suiton and raiton user. The raiton user flickers behind the enemy, zapping then in the middle of the back. The suiton user then flickers in front of the enemy and makes a geyser, lifting the enemy into the air. Then both raiton and suiton create a ball of electrified water and launch it at the enemy doing damage when it hits.

Name: Suiraika
Rank: B
Element: Suiton and Raiton and Katon
Description: This technique involves a Suiton, Raiton, and a Katon user. The Suiton user sends a miniature wave of water over the enemy, drenching him/her and the area, and then the Raiton user runs around the area zapping the water while keeping the enemy in the enclosed area, then the Katon user jumps over the enemy and launches a large fireball at the area.

First I wanna say, cool idea bringing in collaboration jutsu, though I think it will be tough to pull off but we'll have to see.


Now to address the jutsu:

Lightning Step: How fast are we talking? Like flicker fast? And I presumed the max distance that can be traveled is 3 feet since it leaves a 3 feet trail? Also is this trail left in the air, on the ground, or what?

Arc Weilder: If this is intended for a Jounin level character to use then it would fall under A-rank jutsu.

Reign: I don't understand how electricity is used to help you hover?

Lightning Grenade: I would put this as C-Rank

Crank: Lets just have this at B-rank for simplicity's sake.

Shockwave Barrage: This is probably a typo but, "Immediately after the hit the Suiton user will flicker behind the user and stab him from the back. " Don't you mean behind the foe?

Cracking Liquid: The creation of whips made of water is already a cannon jutsu. (Water Release: Water Whip) So that suiton user would have to know that technique in order to be a part of this collaboration. Also, once the whips have been electrified, what prevents it the whips from harming the person holding them?

Everything else seems fine I guess.

the lightning step increases speed but not as fast as flicker no. say triple original speed. the trail is there to show the jutsu is being used. it lasts longer than 3 feet. ya just a typo and okay ill be sure to say that about the whip.and that part where the arc bounces from person to person is the jounin level part, not the original jutsu. reign burns the ozone causing a small updraft. not enough to keep you in air but enough to slow your descent.

ok, give lightning grenade C-Rank and Crank B-rank.

~Name~: Darkness Clone
Type Ninjutsu
Rank: A rank
Element: Darkness
Description: The user creates a clone of pure darkness,basically an upgraded shadow clone. The only difference between this and a shadow clone is that a darkness clone has the ability to regenerate some wounds. This means its not that easy to dispel the clone. When it recieves damage if it is cut open a small burst of dark ooze spreads out, then pulls back in, bulling the wound closed and healing it. This cannot be done if massive damage is doen to the clone, which will dispel it in a cloud of darkness. Only three of these clones can be made at a time.

Denied....basically the same as shadow clone jutsu. If you want a clone purchase shadow clone.

This is a bit different than shadow clone jutsu since it is given a unique ability of minor healing for a longer lasting clone. Shadow clones only need a poke to be expelled, these are a bit stronger than that. However, since all clones disperse chakra, I don't see how he would be able to make five at his current state anyway since you need a large amount of chakra to make even one clone.

I say this has a possibility for approval, it's really just opinions atm. Biased isn't allowed, so I say it can be approved. We might need a third opinion though if Aisu still disagrees.

ill diminish the count to just three

Shockwave needs more detail
Arch Wield is A-ranked
Lightning Release: Lightning Dragon Inner Shock is A-ranked
Reign: what logic is used behind this?
Lightning Grenade is B-ranked unless you include much more details
Pulse needs more details
Crank is redundant as it is already possible with Chakra Flow to add lightning release to a weapon
There is already a Jutsu like Cracking liquid so its denied.

watch this video and im pretty sure you can guess which is what. and as for the arc wielder only a jonin can hold a continuous arc, lower can only do bolts

reign is for moving away or slowing descent, crank isnt redundant it powers lightning sytyle jutsu and it generates electricity around my body, and pulse is like the static shield from DBZ when they make a small shield accpet this one is electric

and the last one you said is a combination. The one that is like it is used with one person this is two people

It's an upgraded version of the Shadow Clone?
If, so I'd like to ask if you have learned the Shadow Clone Jutsu as a prerequiste?
At Max I also think you should make two clones at a time, instead of three.
Wound wise should be more specific. I'd actually like it to take X amount of hits instead of wounds, Because a Kunai slash or ect probally couldn't take it down regardless, if it is an upgrade to the shadow clone. It can only be destroyed by a large wound it seems.

Anyway. Yeah I'd give it an 8/10 for approval the rest is up to you guys.

Alright Approved, however Cracking Liquid needs to be removed because its just like the Water Whip.

i told you it was discussed. water whip must be known by the suiton user before the COLLABORATION jutsu can be done

Alright. Thats approved then.

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~Name~: Darkness style: Bringer-of-Darkness Technique (not the hashirama senju one)
Type Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Darkness
Description: Just like in the http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Bringer-of-Darkness_Technique version this causes an almost blinding darkness. Accept this isnt a genjutsu. This is an actual jutsu that makes a surrounding area filled with actual darkness (15 meters). Akki is hidden inside of this. This jutsu does not hide him from sensors, But while in here he makes no sound or any other senseable movement. The area can also move with him.. Not only can Akki move through this darkness as if it wasnt there he can see others also (i guess like hidden mist?) Alone this jutsu cannot HARM anyone, unless they trip on a hidden rock or something...

Duration: 3 posts
Cool Down: once per topic

Well you are taking away sight, diminishing sound,and taking away smell despite this not being a genjutsu. You can also travel through the darkness, or you can move the darkness as you walk?

bump

can you travel through the darkness?

I can move through it silently but not instantly.

Okay I get it.
Distance is 10 m.
Duration 4 Post
Cool down 10 Post
Usage Twice Per topic
Rank A

What if 20 m 3 posts 1 per topic? What rank is that?

I wouldnt be giving you 20 meters. The jutsu moves with you so ever step you take its moving along with you. At most you can have is 15 meters because its not a definte range if you decide to move.