Hashi Yamanaka

Personal Information~
Name: Hashi Yamanaka
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Village: Hidden village of Cloud
Rank: Genin
Bloodline: Telepathy
Main Class: Sniper
Secondary Class Tactician


Appearance and Personality~





Personality: An ambition to become a politician. She seeks information and studies it carefully and then makes a choice which benefits her and her allies. She seems to always be on a serious mood and looks to be focused. She seeks to fall in love with a man who is kind and caring and military powerful. Her hobbies are to study military strategies. She dislikes foreigners, especially Leaf, they are their historical enemies.


Elements~

~Those with a bloodline~
Clan Element: -
Primary Element: -
Secondary Element: -


~Those with no bloodline~
Primary Element: Fire
Secondary Element: Chuunin level
Tertiary Element: yet to obtain


Justu~
E rank are free*

~Name~: Body Flicker Technique
Type Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: By using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds.

~Name~: Mind interference
Type KKG genjutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: Touching the target to transfer a telepathic message. Could be used to send informatio to someone who is knocked out, asleep or in genjutsu, without waking him/her up.

~Name~: Silent message technique
Type KKG genjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: Sending a telepathic message. Max range of tansfer is 50m (55yards). The aim must be precise.

~Name~: Genjutsu cancel
Type Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: First you need to stop the flow of chakra in your body, and then apply an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the genjutsu caster's chakra. This can also be done by an unaffected ninja by applying a sudden surge of chakra into the affected person

~Name~: Fireball Technique
Type Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: The user blows out a fireball from their mouth.

Weapons~
Weapon(1) Sword
Weapon(2) Kunais
Weapon(3) Shurikens
Weapon(4) First aid kit
Weapon(5) Military rations pills

History(optional)~
History: Hashi was born at a summer for over ten years ago. Her life was already decided by her parents, she was to be raised to become a representative of the clan.
Her youth would be consumed by training etiquettes and training ninjutsu and her bloodline ability. Not much free time was over to be spent on playing with other kids.
The training sessions considering her swords play was taught by a man who was second to none, or as so he claimed. His name was Akira. Hashi liked the personality of Akira. Akira was a man who would always smile, and was never a pessimist. Even during the worst illness and facing death. He was someone to be looked up to the very end. When Hashi was 12 years old, Akira passed away.
The young girl felt that she had no one else who she could feel like being herself around. She felt so lonely and might even be so today.

Well since this app hasn't been touched I guess I'll do the honors....

1) Firstly, you might have to change your clan or try to get it approved again since it wasn't the first time.
2) If your clan deals with telepathy then how can the clan element be fire? Maybe you want sort that bit out or explain it to me.
3) Or any of those jutsu's custom? If so then make sure you get them approved after your app has been approved. If not then link me to the site where these canon jutsus are at.

Thank you for your compliance ^_^

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1) Yamanaka is a cannon clan.

2) It's a confusing template. My character has a bloodline ability so I filled the required part.

3) It says nowhere that the ones which are cannon and anime jutsus would be the only ones to be allowed.

Okay, how I see it is. The yamanaka clan doesn't have a clan element, but a specialty in mental techniques. So therefore she should follow the template of those without a bloodline, because it isn't a bloodline that allows them to use mental jutsu. Being in the yamanaka clan would give her access to the Yamanaka clan jutsu, Here. I don't believe Mind Interference and Silent Message Technique are official Yamanaka jutsu, so those would have to be registered in Jutsu Registration and approved if you want to start with them. You should be able to make custom mental jutsus because of your clan affiliation. You should be able to start with fire element because the Yamanaka doesn't have a element, just a specialty. Remove fire as clan element and use the other section for those without bloodline.

The jutsus are approved

Enough said.

1/2 Approved for 3 jutsu and 3 weapons.

2/2 approved for the same.