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+2Jemini Kyohki Taiyō no kagayaki 6 posters | Author | Message |
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Taiyō no kagayaki Genin
TP : 0 Posts : 31 Join date : 2011-06-04 Age : 30 Location : Tennessee
Ninja Profile Main Class: Tactical Secondary Class: Sensor Sensei:
| Subject: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Thu Jun 23, 2011 12:21 pm | |
| Taiyo was walking, half asleep and tired from her journey, down a winding trail. Her thoughts were going wild though. She may be half asleep but she was on high alert on the inside.
Why haven't I encountered anyone yet?... This is odd. I haven't sensed anyboby. What is goi...
Her thoughts came upon a broken track as Taiyo stepped upon smooth grass and her eyes grazed what was in front of her. Huge open plains rolled only to be cut off by deep ravines and rivers, tall and thick bamboo forests, and a wide forest of giant mushrooms.
Beautiful... But... Desolate?
Taiyo used her new technique she'd been perfecting.
"Grass/Leave Release: Sensory Technique"
The leaves and grass told her nothing. Desolate. Empty. Nothing but the wind and open land. She felt odd knowing that she was the only one there but she also felt impowered. She took in the atmosphere again and breathed in. But it wasn't just foriegn air. This was Taiyō no kagayaki's air. Taiyō no kagayaki's Land.
Last edited by Taiyō no kagayaki on Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:01 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
| | | Jemini Kyohki Jounin
TP : 0 Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-04-11
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:00 am | |
| A land, one that seemed ripe for the picking. It was an interesting land it was, like one that was out of a picture; beauty was everywhere. From the wet grass to the tall trees to the rivers that seemed to be pressed through it like like a tie on a shirt. It was an amazing land indeed, one that seemed to be so peaceful that not a soul could interrupt its tranquility; there didn't even look like a single being had been trekking through the grass. Maybe this land was one of those places that people looked over like it meant nothing to them at all, but that wasn't the case at all to some people. Some people had the idea in their head that they could just take what they believed was theirs, but some people had in their craniums that not everyone should get what they wanted. The world consisted of these two type of beings, but there was also another type of human being in this world and they would be called the slackers; the ones that did nothing about anything because they believed that there was no need for them to get involved with the affairs of others. Unfortunately, Jemini wasn't one of those people.
He stood knelt down in the grass, arriving seconds after someone was trying to search for people that might have been in the area, but he didn't know that yet. He looked up and saw something, but he was slightly confused of what it could have been; as soon as the figure started moving he figured that it would probably be best to stay out of their view. Hand gestures made like he was throwing up gang signs, but he decided to keep his hands low so that he wasn't being too obvious about his location. Although he was not an assassin he could be pretty sneaky at times. A jolt, he passed his hands over the wet grass feeling the water on his hands like he had never felt it before; it fascinated him to some extent making him feel a charge run from his hand through the grass. He didn't know what it was about the grass that made him feel this way but maybe it was possible that it was the true beauty of the land that was getting to him; it was something that he wasn't fairly used to. As of now, one would probably think that he was hippie, but he didn't go around hugging trees like they were people; he was simply festering in the lands gracefullness right now.
Looking up to the girl who wasn't too far away, but she still had not seen him yet, he wondered what could have brought her to this place. He didn't know if she lived here or if she was just visiting, but the question was did it really matter? His odd eyes, one green and the other red, pierced past her outer being for he was looking for the intents of her heart, but would he be able to find it? He really knew what people were thinking but his assumptions usually were spot on; unfortunately he couldn't see the girl's face so he couldn't really tell what she was thinking or the feelings that she might have been giving off. He couldn't say that he didn't care, because he did even though he didn't know her; he was a very caring person. For some reason he had always been a caring person, which might have been because he didn't know his parents; maybe they would be proud of him because of what he had been up to, but no one really knows. Maybe he didn't even know, but if he was to figure anything out today it was what this girl was up to. | |
| | | Taiyō no kagayaki Genin
TP : 0 Posts : 31 Join date : 2011-06-04 Age : 30 Location : Tennessee
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| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sat Jun 25, 2011 12:58 pm | |
| (ooc: just gonna go ahead and say, kindly, that with my ability activated there isnt any way you couldve snuck up on me within a 75 meter radius.)
Taiyou was heading off in the direction of the mushroom forest when she felt a presence through the grass. She was right. It was odd that this beautiful land was so desolate. A trap maybe? But then again maybe not... Maybe it was that someone was just trying to find a home as she was. She wanted her home here. Here and here only. It was so beautiful and untouched-- the way she liked most things. Taiyou swooped around, nervous, but she wasn't running away. She saw the grass shift, a little unnaturally. The presence was there-- hunkered down, hiding, watching. A human. It had to be a human. The question was: What was he or she up to??? Taiyou tapped into her chakra to intensify her senses in her ability. She always ran, but she had to stand firm. The funny thing is that Taiyou was drawn, but didn't take a step toward, to this person. Curiousity was a pesky thing... | |
| | | Jemini Kyohki Jounin
TP : 0 Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-04-11
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| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:13 pm | |
| ((OOC: And now I will be calling my hit. You're probably wondering what hit, so I'll show you. - Quote :
- Hand gestures made like he was throwing up gang signs, but he decided to keep his hands low so that he wasn't being too obvious about his location.
This would be me using handseals. - Quote :
- A jolt, he passed his hands over the wet grass feeling the water on his hands like he had never felt it before; it fascinated him to some extent making him feel a charge run from his hand through the grass.
This is me releasing the Lightning Release technique and it using the wet grass as a conductor; this would make it easier for the lightning to travel through the grass and it would also make it stronger.)) IC: It would seem that although this girl was some sort of Sensor she wasn't capable of sensing the Lightning Surge that he was giving off that had caught her head on. She would be stunned from the attack due to not moving out of the way, so since she was stuck that way he released even more of his chakra into the attack frying the girl completely from head to toe. All you would see is some girl having waves of lightning travel across her body then just going up in smoke. After he released the jutsu she fell to the ground, dead. He didn't think that he had put that much chakra into it, but he did. There absolutely no chance of surivival from this technique and the situation they were in. Jemini walked over the dead body and said, "This land belongs to me now." After saying that he pocketed the money off of the girl, picked her dead body up, placed her in a dry area where there no grass, and set her body ablaze with a Fire Release technique that he had prepared for when he was taking her over to the area. After the body had burnt out he threw the body into the river and went on with his day. [Exit] | |
| | | Taiyō no kagayaki Genin
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| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:30 pm | |
| (ooc: Bullshit. this is being taken up with an admin. 1. I would've sensed it through the grass. You can't say that i was attacked unknowingly. You're first post was even void. ...Duh. 2. Not saying to Metagame, but you should look into something someone else posted that you don't know about without flying blind. here again. Duh. And,oh yeah, the whole "hiding in the grass" thing and "that there's no way i could've known you where there", once again, B.U.L.L.S.H.I.T. I can physicly 'feel' you, what you're doin, and where you're at-- My Technique. Dude... Face it, you're void.) | |
| | | Jemini Kyohki Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sun Jun 26, 2011 2:10 pm | |
| ((OOC:
1. Just because your character could have sensed my chakra through the grass, doesn't mean that my character knew that she could. Also, if the post was voided why respond to the first one anyways? 2. The exact thing that you're telling me now is to metagame, and that sweetie is against the rules. Besides, learning through experience is better than any other kind of learning method. Now, just because you stated that your character knew some kind of ability OOC doesn't mean that my character knows about your ability IC; so in my character's eyes there probably was no way you could have seen him and he can still hide in the grass. 3. Just because you have some technique that lets you sense where I am doesn't mean that my post is void. Your logic, though it was worth a shot, is irrelevant. 4. Oh yeah, and because you failed to acknowledge my attack in your post it would still connect either way.)) | |
| | | Kyouki Jounin
TP : 85 Posts : 376 Join date : 2011-04-24 Age : 28 Location : Tennessee Q-Q
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| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:34 pm | |
| OOC:
Alright, I'll be handling this. So state, it has not reached the 48 hour limit, so she can still acknowledge the attack since she has yet to make an IC post. You're describing basically in your post that the attack has hit, but she still has a chance to get out of it due to being able to actually feel the chakra and where the Lightning Surge's path is. So basically, everything from the moment you said she for fried head to toe is voided. Stunning is only if she doesn't reply within 48 hours/can't get out the way.
You're ninjas. Read the handbook.
And judged. | |
| | | Jemini Kyohki Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:59 pm | |
| ((OOC: Actually, you're wrong. I'll try to break this down for you so you can explain it. 1st Post: Taiyo claiming land 2nd Post: Jemini arriving, attacking. 3rd Post: Taiyo sensing Jemini is there, not acknowledging my attack 4th Post: Me calling my hit, Jemini's attack connects.
If your opponent fails to recognize an attack in a previous post, and if there is enough detail in the post to signify that you made an attack, you can call a hit; that's exactly what I did. Besides, she already posted after my attack so she doesn't have 48hrs to acknowledge it because the hit was already called.)) | |
| | | Hisoka Setsuna Akatsuki
TP : 100 Posts : 332 Join date : 2011-03-31 Age : 28
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| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sun Jun 26, 2011 4:14 pm | |
| (OOC: Make an OOC conflict post. No fucking spamming. And Kyouki, we're on break. You may get fired for this. .-. ) | |
| | | Taiyō no kagayaki Genin
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| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sun Jun 26, 2011 6:57 pm | |
| ((ooc: so... since you choose to ignore me Jemini... i suppose its only fair that i do the same. Ill start where i left off. Only being fair. lol. Also, which i may be wrong being that this is my first rp post EVER, that iff i post ooc after your attack i still have time to post a legit response. And thanks Kyouki. I really didn't know what to do bc i only had 48hrs and admins were on vacation... But everthing aside, hisoka is right. we gotta stop spamming. and post a new topic in occ discussions or something.))
Taiyo was hit. Hit hard, but only in her legs making her collapse to the ground. She took it in a flinch. The rest of Taiyo's body went numb from the sharp focus of wind chakra inside. Luckily she sensed some of the lightning chakra through the grass so she could counter. Thinking while being hit, She knew that open (now dry) grassy fields werent gonna get it... Taiyo only wanted a secluded home. But it looked as if she had to fight for it. Whats worse though is that she had to fight someone clearly much higher ranked than her. He used a technique that Taiyo thought he had to borrow chakra from his team to have even if he was super high in rank. She learned that in research. But why would someone attack somebody that much weaker than he?
It didnt matter. She had to tap into her tactical mind. Nothing could get past her. If it did, it would be close to over.
Right after the hit, Taiyo expected him to close in for another attack. So she didn't waste time picking herself up, and she immediately started forming handsigns. In less than a second, she was sucked under the dry soil that the stranger so graciously dried out for her. The earth sealed up around her, tight, hard, and back to normal, no trace she'd entered. No way to follow. Taiyo dug deep into the dry dark soil out of the strangers jusu and physical reach. Waiting and feeling, and watching the surface. She had to think.... | |
| | | Master Red Bijuu
TP : 127 Posts : 492 Join date : 2011-01-10
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Medical Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Sun Jun 26, 2011 8:19 pm | |
| Wow... I'm locking this topic until the break is over. | |
| | | Sion Bijuu
TP : 0 Posts : 100 Join date : 2011-06-03 Age : 31
Ninja Profile Main Class: Tank Secondary Class: Seal Master Sensei: N/A
| Subject: Re: Entrance 1: Foreign Land Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:30 pm | |
| Looks like we have a problem here.... GlobalMod Powers Activate!!! - Kyouki wrote:
- OOC:
Alright, I'll be handling this. So state, it has not reached the 48 hour limit, so she can still acknowledge the attack since she has yet to make an IC post. You're describing basically in your post that the attack has hit, but she still has a chance to get out of it due to being able to actually feel the chakra and where the Lightning Surge's path is. So basically, everything from the moment you said she for fried head to toe is voided. Stunning is only if she doesn't reply within 48 hours/can't get out the way.
You're ninjas. Read the handbook.
And judged. Everything in the QUote above is wrong.... She posted AFTER he attacked... We will use his quotes about this Said Attack. - Jemini Kyohki wrote:
- ((OOC: And now I will be calling my hit. You're probably wondering what hit, so I'll show you.
- Quote :
- Hand gestures made like he was throwing up gang signs, but he decided to keep his hands low so that he wasn't being too obvious about his location.
This would be me using handseals. - Quote :
- A jolt, he passed his hands over the wet grass feeling the water on his hands like he had never felt it before; it fascinated him to some extent making him feel a charge run from his hand through the grass.
This is me releasing the Lightning Release technique and it using the wet grass as a conductor; this would make it easier for the lightning to travel through the grass and it would also make it stronger. Now, this quote easily states the "Said attack." Now, the attack was very nicely woven into the post to the point of ME having to read it twice to actually find it. Now, I declare the attack Offical. I've always been told IF YOU think that it is an attack it most likely is. So, I will give Jemini his claim. So, if anyone has any Questions or problems with my Judgement. please take it to teh Conflict Section. Judgement: Jemini's Attack lands and Taiyo is dead. Hakushin/Layle/Sion Out! | |
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