Inhuman Genin
TP : 0 Posts : 3 Join date : 2011-06-20
| Subject: Shen Uchiha Mon Jun 20, 2011 6:47 pm | |
| Personal Information~Name: Uchiha, Shen Age: 13 Gender: Male Village: Iron Ninja Information~Rank: Genin Main Class:Tank Secondary ClassAssassin First ElementKaton Second ElementRaiton Appearance and Personality~Picture OR description: Shen is the black sheep of his family. Born with blonde hair and blue eyes, he was an eyesore to his parents as a child. They thought that his lack of dark color made him less of an Uchiha than everyone else. Nevertheless, Shen's father began to train him to become a shinobi at the age of five. During this training, Shen showed promise, but he always lacked the motivation that his father was looking for. Soon, another Uchiha came into the picture when his brother was born. His father had finally gotten the son he wanted. From the beginning, Shen was neglected, forced to continue training himself while his younger brother got his families praise. Though he should have, he never let it bother him, and due to that, he developed a shell that his his emotion from the world. He soon went to the academy where he met a few friends, as well as rivals. Just like expected of an Uchiha, he received top marks, earning the praise of his teachers. This was what made the boy so dependent on pleasing his superiors. He looked for praise that his parents failed to give him in other authority figures. He finally graduated and is now living the life of an iron shinobi. Personality: Shen is the perfect weapon. Well...at least that's what he attitude says. Though he is far from done learning how to be a proper shinobi, he has the mannerisms of an Anbu ranked ninja. He is very loyal and respectful to all higher ups. He does what he is told with no back talk, which is why he is the ideal person to go on a mission. But this gift is also a curse. No matter how intelligent he is, it seems that he can't get the idea of emotions. He acts as if he cares for nothing, and uses that to complete his missions. Some may say he isn't human. Thought he claims to not feel anything, he is not evil, he has friends and precious people that he wishes to protect. When fighting, Shen likes to go for the swift kill. He is not the loud boisterous ninja, that many grow up to be. He prefers to stay in the shadows and strike when its best. His tactical mind is what helps him succeed most of the time. Unlike his family, he does not call himself an avenger, therefore does not let his emotions lead him in battle. In fact, he thinks its stupid to wear your heart on your sleeve while fighting. Justu~E rank are free* Jutsu(1)Great Fireball Technique Jutsu(2) Phoenix Fire Technique Jutsu(3)Crow Clone Jutsu(4) Jutsu(5) History(optional)~History:
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Hisoka Setsuna Akatsuki
TP : 100 Posts : 332 Join date : 2011-03-31 Age : 28
Ninja Profile Main Class: Vanguard Secondary Class: Illusionary Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Shen Uchiha Mon Jun 20, 2011 6:53 pm | |
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Kyouki Jounin
TP : 85 Posts : 376 Join date : 2011-04-24 Age : 28 Location : Tennessee Q-Q
Ninja Profile Main Class: Tank Secondary Class: Medical Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Shen Uchiha Mon Jun 20, 2011 6:55 pm | |
| I would add on a word description with your appearance and a history for a higher score, otherwise I would give this a 2/5. | |
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Hisoka Setsuna Akatsuki
TP : 100 Posts : 332 Join date : 2011-03-31 Age : 28
Ninja Profile Main Class: Vanguard Secondary Class: Illusionary Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Shen Uchiha Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:10 pm | |
| So yeah. Edit out 3 of your jutsu. | |
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Master Red Bijuu
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Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Medical Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Shen Uchiha Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:21 pm | |
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Hisoka Setsuna Akatsuki
TP : 100 Posts : 332 Join date : 2011-03-31 Age : 28
Ninja Profile Main Class: Vanguard Secondary Class: Illusionary Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Shen Uchiha Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:25 pm | |
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Kyouki Jounin
TP : 85 Posts : 376 Join date : 2011-04-24 Age : 28 Location : Tennessee Q-Q
Ninja Profile Main Class: Tank Secondary Class: Medical Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Shen Uchiha Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:29 pm | |
| In other words...
APPROVED. | |
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