Jana Chunin
TP : 15 Posts : 172 Join date : 2011-03-12
Ninja Profile Main Class: Berserker Secondary Class: Assassin Sensei: n/a
| Subject: Suzumebachi Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:36 pm | |
| Name: Suzumebachi Type of Weapon: Glove/dagger Appearance: - Spoiler:
Element: Lightning Ability: Using the lightning element the user can implant lightning chakra into the enemy's body creating a small spot on the body with the marking of a dragonfly (didn't want to copy the complete design) to then be visible even through clothing and on the skin as it forms. If the spot that was hit once before it is hit 2 more times the opponent will die {Direct hits only. No grazing}. The marks stay there for as long as 5 posts. Description: As its first step, Jana stabs her enemy with Suzumebachi’s blade. Not only leaving a rather deep wound, the attack leaves a dragonfly-shaped stamp on the victim’s body. Spreading from the center of the wound, known as Hōmonka, this stamp becomes the target of Jana’s second attack. If struck in this same spot that was hit the first time, the person will inevitably die and thus illustrate "Death in Two Steps." When the ability takes effect, a larger crest quickly spreads out from the two smaller ones, completely destroying the victim's body. The crests are maintained by Jana's will and are impossible to remove unless she wills it. The mechanics behind Suzumebachi's ability takes effect not through point of entry but rather point of actual surface contact. This ability is caused by a venom that Suzumebachi secretes. When it enters the target's body, it spreads throughout their body in a matter of minutes, if not seconds, destroying it without a trace. Weakness: Can be destroyed by a chakra enhanced attack like a hyuuga technique and or chakra enhanced strength. Drawbacks: Ability can not be active for more than 5 posts at a time. Can only be used twice a thread. Materials: Made of unknown materials of a dagger, goldish metals, black glove. (I don't know what the original materials were but please feel free to say)
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Kyouki Jounin
TP : 85 Posts : 376 Join date : 2011-04-24 Age : 28 Location : Tennessee Q-Q
Ninja Profile Main Class: Tank Secondary Class: Medical Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Suzumebachi Thu Jun 09, 2011 1:24 pm | |
| O.O Dear GOD.
Okay, though I do like the idea of this, tone down the duration of the ability to 5 posts, and make it two hits [direct! no grazing!]. Then it's good.
I'll say...
50 [ability] + 20 [chakra-enhanced dagger] + 10 [glove] + 30 [goldish metals] = 110 points.
Approved otherwise. | |
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Jana Chunin
TP : 15 Posts : 172 Join date : 2011-03-12
Ninja Profile Main Class: Berserker Secondary Class: Assassin Sensei: n/a
| Subject: Re: Suzumebachi Wed Jun 22, 2011 12:27 pm | |
| Ok, I have done the things you wanted and now I am going to buy this weapon. | |
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