Kaguya Dance Release

Name: Kaguya Dance Release
Clan: Kaguya Clan
Element: n/a

Appearance
Description: When a child is born with ordinary hair colors like auborn, brown, blonde, or black it is not expected that it would turn green. But every three generations of Kaguya, at the beggining of their bloodline training, their bone densities increase extravegantly from the average steel. All of these individuals had the unique charector trait of green hair as their bone denisty's go through what is known as the "Turtle effect". After achieving certain milestones of their lives the user's bones grow into a higher density than that of steel and other metals. This is the last time any one witnessed the ability be reincarnated into a Kaguya member and this generation's member is named Jojo Kaguya.
Ability: (Click Ability for the link of the Density Chart)

Genin: Steel
Chunnin: Molybdenum
Sp. Jounin: Lead
Jounin+: Mercury

Duration: n/a
Cool Down: n/a

Jojo Kaguya wrote:

Changing hair color to green at the beggining of the training the Kaguya's bone density average is steel but with the sign of green hair their bone denisty is known as the turtle effect. After achieving certain milestones of life the user's bones grow into a higher density than that of steel and other metals.

1. This doens't make any sense what-so-ever. I would like for you to reword it. So, one could read it clearly.

2. The density check out. The ability overall is approvable. Yet, I can't approve it without doing the number 1. So, Hop to it.

Ok. Hope I edited it up a bit. It is more so a history lesson than a true all out appearance since you can't really show the appearnce of bones. I edited it none the less.