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Raigon Legendary Sannin
TP : 0 Posts : 184 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 112
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Raigon Done~ Sat Feb 26, 2011 7:55 pm | |
| Personal Information~Name: Raigon Kisuke Uchiha Age: 16 Gender: Male Village: Konohagakure Rank: Genin Bloodline: Uchiha Main Class: Seal Master Secondary Class Berserker Appearance and Personality~Picture OR description: - Spoiler:
Personality: A dark cloud seems to follow this man around as he is the so called voice of the Uchiha and meant to be the one to constantly make a straight face for everyone and everything. The leader of the Uchiha is supposedly the perfect ninja specimen although there is nothing perfect about Raigon. Sadly he is a so called genius of the ninja world having achieved all three tomoe before anyone else in the clan could pumping him to the position. That coupled with his battle skills make him the best and only leader the clan has seen for around twenty years leaving the weight of rebuilding upon him. Around the village he is the one man constantly patrolling and incredibly uptight around everyone, but in a more self controlled area he shows his true colors becoming much more free and lose, especially around those he cares for. Every now and again he enjoys a sip of sake never becoming inebriated and always keeping his calm demeanor no matter what the situation is. One sever downfall to the man is that he is easily woe by most women with a cute face, nice smile, and a seemingly good personality. This does at times sway decisions, but is not likely to happen when it is important. Elements~~Those with a bloodline~ Clan Element:Fire Primary Element: Lightning Secondary Element: Wind ~Those with no bloodline~ Primary Element:Secondary Element:Tertiary Element: ( Tertiary means third ) Justu~D rank are free* Jutsu(1) Fire release pheonix fire jutsu Jutsu(2) Fire release burning ash accumilation. Jutsu(3) Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Weapons~Weapon(1) Katana Weapon(2) 20 shuriken Weapon(3) 20 kunai History~History: Optional
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:07 am | |
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Kira Genin
TP : 0 Posts : 5 Join date : 2011-01-16
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Sun Feb 27, 2011 5:35 am | |
| I know I'm not a mod or something but I think genin start with 1 class and 1 element.. | |
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Suno Genin
TP : 1 Posts : 223 Join date : 2011-01-13
Ninja Profile Main Class: Vanguard Secondary Class: Tank Sensei: Blast Cloud Kazumi
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Sun Feb 27, 2011 9:20 am | |
| They do... and Oro is supposed to grade the apps as well <.<
They get one element, which if they have a KKG is there KKG element In this case Katon
They get one class, in this case would be seal master
and they don't get automatically 5/5 jutsu/weapons that's for the staff to decide
I'm a Staffer...
Lets see
rough profile outline, no history and no "going above and beyond" which would equate to a five, which is an application that just shines and is a a perfect example of what to do.
A four would be an A, quality work, but maybe a point missing for something substandard
I see you as a 2-3, the average profile, not a lot of effort, wanting to rp which is good, but at the same time not really pushing the mettle of your profile.
I feel generous I give you a 3 once you fix said mistakes | |
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Lord Victus Jounin
TP : 269 Posts : 946 Join date : 2011-01-04
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Tank Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:01 am | |
| For the record, as far as elements and classes go, you may have it in your application but it is irrelevant until you reach the proper ranks. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:44 pm | |
| Also. Im not even supposed to check apps Oshi. :3 |
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Raigon Legendary Sannin
TP : 0 Posts : 184 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 112
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Thu Mar 03, 2011 6:46 am | |
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Lord Victus Jounin
TP : 269 Posts : 946 Join date : 2011-01-04
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Tank Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:16 pm | |
| Remove the stuff about the chidori and it's spin offs.
chidori is on the restricted list | |
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Shūryō Kaguya Chunin
TP : 0 Posts : 217 Join date : 2011-01-11 Location : The Realm of Tragedic Creativity
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Tue Mar 08, 2011 4:27 pm | |
| Was this even approved yet officially? His jutsu haven't changed. | |
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Raigon Legendary Sannin
TP : 0 Posts : 184 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 112
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:35 pm | |
| My jutsu were changed, I was officially approved, and Devin agreed to let me have chidori as a jutsu which in turn allows the spinoffs. | |
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Lord Victus Jounin
TP : 269 Posts : 946 Join date : 2011-01-04
Ninja Profile Main Class: Assassin Secondary Class: Tank Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Wed Mar 09, 2011 5:59 pm | |
| Naw, just remove the jutsu.
If you want chidori, then make it to the final 4 of the chunin exams. 4 of the restricted jutsus will be given out then. | |
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Raigon Legendary Sannin
TP : 0 Posts : 184 Join date : 2011-02-26 Age : 112
Ninja Profile Main Class: Secondary Class: Sensei:
| Subject: Re: Raigon Done~ Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:43 pm | |
| Alrighty then bucko they are outta here now time to go rape a bitch : D | |
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