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PostSubject: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyTue May 03, 2011 5:43 pm

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Mr. Eskaru sullenly walked through the devastated city, it was very dramatic, or ah he should say sullen, melodramatic, or even cliched. but such was nature. He looked behind him to see the scathingly mad fellow named Liozen was still behind him. He seemed a likable enough fellow, but he seemed to hold some form of death grudge on the presiding Kage. Stearc chuckled to himself, what could a kid possibly have done to start that, he chanced on not asking. His black eyes looked forward, and saw one of the only standing buildings, The Kage's office, and it would definitely be a morale destroyer if the man behind Mr. Eskaru were to destroy the building.

He turned around, and gestured upward. "This," he said in his most magnanimous voice, "Is the Kage's office, feel free to do whatever you'd like with the man, it's the position I respect." He bowed his head once more, and stepped aside, not sure what this man could or possibly would do given the right circumstances.
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 10:50 am

(you constantly have to put me down and make me feel worse dont you? i came out to fight you and then ouro gives you a power boost. for one thats not fair. He never traveled to there so how can he do that? also read my post in the introductions. And i can kill you right now as well, you are close enough. and you ignored my attack really. You cant tell me what my move does. They attempted to grab you. That means going for you and following you at great speed no?)
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 10:59 am

[OOC: Actually no. First of all. Lets talk about that power boost. Had I used the boost, you would be dead in the first post I made. I didn't use it. All the jutsu I have used are below C-Rank. Secondly. If you don't describe what those arms did, it means I CAN. Its called the power of interpretation. Your lack of detail is my advantage. Now, on to the next part. That thing you did while meditating? You actually never did it.
I used another thing called interrupting. I attacked you the moment you stopped talking to Eskaru. So you did NO SUCH THING as meditate. Understand?
Moving on. I did not such thing as ignore your attack. I clearly mentioned dodging it using the shunshin, simultaneously attacking you. You were the one that ignored me making a hand seal. You were the one that ignored the fact that if I use shunshin and you don't move, you have less than an eighth of a second to react given the situation you were in. Shunshin is a high-speed dash. Used to cover a distance of four meters, its more or less instantaneous. ]
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 11:25 am

(okay. Then you say the building fell forward. Well i didnt want to start conflict but i said i walked out of the way of the building. THAT IT DID NOT LAND ON ME. Is that description enough? dude im done okay? like i said you came and attaked me why? Oh guess what...i still had enough time to use enough seals for a substitution. My other clone is still alive. i am not dead yet. substution would ruin my clone but i will be just drained no? if thats not the case eskaru wont heal me. Fuck all of this honostly i never wanted to be kage. But i did it cuz i was asked and the same person who nominated me helped kill me. Go read that intro topic. seriously.)
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 11:26 am

[Quote it. I don't have time to read your stupid bullshit. Quote the part where you formed the hand seal and used substitution. Do it now.]
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 11:32 am

(lio i told you im done. Im sorry okay? You won. i admit that. Im just in pain right now and my lower half is numb. just...idk ill think of something to post.)
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 11:38 am

[OOC: Akki. For one, there was no substitution. You need to make hand seals to use a substitution. You sir, formed your clone and that was all you did. So lying isn't getting you anywhere. So naturally, I won. Now that you've admitted defeat, we can move on. Its Eskaru's turn to post. Also, you're either either unconscious or in incapacitating pain.

As for your Irl problems, I can't help by feel cynical towards your claims. So lets just say that if you truly are unwell, then I do hope you get better. But if that was a lie, I have nothing more to say.]
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 11:43 am

(someone might be able to save my life...and i can still be fully able if a medic can come but he wont heal me and you know it.)
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 2:52 pm

Mr. Eskaru had been watching the fight with some intermittent interest. The kage had said he was next, he chuckled at that, and slowly felt his way to the bottle hanging off his belt, as well as being a weapon, the alcohol was a comfort. He saw the man he'd just met anmed Lio, basically charge the man which was named the Kage of Kirigakure? There had been a few retaliations to the man named Lio's attack, but the sheer force of will this man exhibited triumphed over the kage. The kage was hurt, mortally it seemed. That is when he heard Liozen speak up about knowing a doctor. Stearc smiled, "I am a Medic, but surely that should suffice." He chuckled, as he pulled out his trusted Scalpel, it was a weapon, small, but deadly in the right hands. It just so happened that those hands happened to be Mr. Eskaru's. "So, what should you have me do?" he asked, with a slight trace of sympathy in his voice, seeing a man in such a position as this would bring melancholy to most.
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 7:30 pm

(OOC: i take its my post)

Akki was in searing pain from the attack. Ankoku slithered out of the wound, doing his best to hold it closed. "You really done it this time my boy." Akki just nodded, gritting his teeth. Ankoku lapped up some of the blood to keep Akki clean. Akki looked over at his attacker. "Why didnt you kill me?" Akki looked over at Eskaru and just shook his head. The man only thought of himself. A drunken bastard. Akki grinned, the alcohol was destroying his liver. Ankoku to the form of a hand and attatched himself to Akki. Akki made a handseal and said "Demon synthesis" in a exhuasted tone. The blood started to boil, trying to heal the wound, but it was only keeping his detattched arm alive. Akki sighed, he didnt think he was going to make it.
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyWed May 04, 2011 8:28 pm

[Enters Denkou]

Denkou, a massive tiger black in color with white stripes had been running through the already wrecked village toward the location of the Kage's building. This tiger stood at a height of 10 feet on all fours with a body length of 15 feet from head to tail. Its eyes were red, filled with blood lust as it let out a mighty roar toward the three ninja present(Liozen, Eskaru, and Akki) near the location of the fallen Kage's building, from a distance of about 15 meters, at the time Eskaru began to pull out the scalpel. The look from his eyes was full of killing intent, enough that it could restrain the three completely and make them envision their own deaths of being crushed by his paws. And like that vision, Denkou would slam down his paw on the two called Akki and Eskaru, though he didn't know that were their names obviously. His intentions to crush the two with sheer force under his muscular body and massive strength, instant death it would be, at the time of Eskaru's last spoken sentence. Yes, that would have pleased this massive tiger who hungered for spilled blood. Yet with that initial roar, twenty bright beams of energy soared through the sky toward the ninja, each beam ranging one meter between each other. They were quite fast and fluid, covering a square shaped radius. The front, back, left, and right sides of the group of ninja each had four beams coming, simultaneously, and even four from straight above. How was that possible? It was because of the beams nature to be guided by the user. These beams were intended to completely vaporize them with extreme heat from electrical energy. Each beam was about one meter wide and tall. A large scale attack from a large beast. Denkou was on a savage rampage. As he did all of this, a mental message was sent to his summoner who was not very far from this area itself and was in fact soon to arrive. "You did say kill everyone in and near the building right? Well the building was already destroyed but people were still near it, so Im doing as you told and having my fun."
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyThu May 05, 2011 8:18 am

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Why indeed he mused, walking towards the man whose identity he had yet to inquire, wondering why it was that he'd spared his life. It had been almost instinctual, the deviation in the angle, which made no sense. Instinctually, he was the perfect predator; void of mercy. Though at this moment, it mattered little. In fact, nothing mattered. A vision shaped in the past had finally begun to be realized, and all else paled to utter insignificance in face of that fact. If there was ever a time to indulge his hedonistic self, it would have been then. But years of controlled calculation that'd led to this day held him anchored to his plan and away from the tides of uncertainty. There wasn't a chance that he'd let all his work go to hades for the sake of indulgence. So all thought along that line was moot. In fact, thinking itself was pointless. A waste of time. Everything was going so well, it made no sense to deviate from the plan. But alas, he would have to as from the corner of his eye he caught the looming gargantuan figure of an overgrown furball, moving towards them. Knowing that the likelihood of it peacefully discussing politics over tea were rather slim, he formed a set of hand seals, using his body to conceal them from the sight of that beast.

Electricity danced along the fingers of either hand as the massive beast stopped momentarily before them, roughly 15 meters away. It appeared that the two had not noticed it yet for neither displayed any sign of surprise, or fear. Then again, neither did he. Just as Eskara had begun to speak, he was interrupted as from that distance of fifteen meters he heard a thunderous roar, searing asunder the momentary silence that'd settled over, accompanied by a technique unknown to him, beams of energy searing across from a distance towards them as the lion stared them straight in the eye. Bad move. The beams had barely left its mouth and it had already become arrogant enough to look him in the eye; to attempt and intimidate him using his killing intent. What the furball did not realize though, was that in a world of predators, the lion never fears the jackal. No matter how insatiable its lust for blood was, his was greater. His predatory instinct was supreme. Raising his arm towards the tiger, making a gun with his hand as the index finger pointed straight at its head, he displayed what could truly be described as the eyes of a murderous beast. A monster. Sheer terror would flood the mind of the monster that had foolishly looked him in the eye, destroying its focus and by extension, its chakra control. Some beams of light deviated from their path striking targets randomly, passing by the trio without harming a either one of them while others simply dissipated. They remained unscathed as a dozen odd explosions behind them painting the sky crimson and grey. And at that moment when he had shown the lion his true murderous self, and not a moment later, the tiger stood frozen where he stood, fifteen meters away from the lad as a spiraling bullet of lightning left the tip of his index finger, and made its way straight towards the center of the beasts skull. A distance of fifteen meters would be covered in less than a second. Unless someone rose to the beasts defense, its doom was certain.


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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyThu May 05, 2011 10:16 am

[No need to ask, I summoned it from Kirigakure.]
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[Then you wouldn't mind linking me to that post.]
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyThu May 05, 2011 10:32 am

[The great ocean is a part of the land of water, not Kirigakure. Even your summon has to enter the village. Doesn't matter how close to the village you docked. Enter separately. Till such a time, we won't consider this post legit.]
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[I don't see why not. The great ocean has a shore on the lands of kirigakure, from there my summoned traveled and entered the village through this topic. Plus there are no rules stating that I can't enter a village through someone elses topic nor that I can't have a summon come from travel from where I docked to where you are. It would not be any different if It were myself leaving that area and coming here.]
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[Alrighty then. I'll edit my post.]
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Mr. Eskaru hadn't been paying attention to the what would soon be seen for what it was a giant fucking cat. Among many other things, Mr. Eskaru hated cats. He turned around about the time he had finished speaking. "That.... Was amazingly fucking rude!!" he yelled out after the beams had been sent flying around harmlessly. He performed a few hand-seals, and created a few hundred ice needles. "Snow Swallow Storm." he said with an arrogant smile gracing his face. He then pointed his hand at the overgrown feline, and the seven hundred accumulated by the time he pointed, took flight directly at the tiger.
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Akki zighed and layed there. He might as well help what he can. Akki peformed a few handseals, and started generating raiton chakra in his hands.

"lightning style: shockwave."

He said this in a low tone. Just as the icicles headed for there path a small wave of electrical energy followed, which grew in size but lessened.in power as it went. Akki leaned back. He was saving up chakra, using lower rank jutsu trying not to die.

Akki's clone entered the fight a little too late, but not way too late. The clone, in an attempt to save akki, body flickered straight at the tiger, shoilder lowered, ready for impact. This was the clones final stand as.the.recoil would dispel it since it had taken so much damage before hand.
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Timing was everything for this turn of events. Denkou had roared as Eskaru drew the scalpel, and along with that roar was an array of beams soaring through the air. His roar had gone unnoticed at first yet soon he had locked eyes with one who blocked the others view of him. At that moment, Denkou felt a bloodlust stronger than his and he found himself unable to move. Was it the same skill? And at the same moment a bullet of lightning left the man heading toward Denkou's skull. Denkou's laser circus attack was also affected by his inability to move, some of the beams dispersing completely while others went off course of the target. By sheer luck it would seem, one of the beams that went off course intercepted the trajectory of the lightning bullet. The beams themselves were a meter wide and a meter high and move, so as this one would sweep the bullet off course and into its own trajectory, it would have save Denkou from that tragedy. The beams force and mass was greater than that of the bullet which allowed it to do so. A couple of seconds had passed from that point of being unable to move, Denkou had found himself quickly coming back to his own senses, his own excitement rising again. His attack had been diverted by this man's own killer intent, Denkou would be more cautious from this point on.

Denkou had regained control of himself as one began to shout toward him. Something about him being rude. Denkou wouldn't pay attention as he let out another roar releasing a dark fog from his mouth that would cover the area, thirty meters all around from current Denkou's position to be exact. Yet the fog would rise to be about ten meters. Denkou would move, within this fog, from his position at the time the man began forming his ice attack. He would appear as nothing more than a large faint silhouette as he move about, blending in with the surrounding large wrecked buildings. As he moved he could hear a loud explosion at his previous location, it would seem all seven hundred were sent in a linear path at that location, along with some electrical output. Oddly however, Denkou had avoided another attack from what he knew was a man that suddenly appeared at that location in the path of the other's ice attack. Was he also gonna attack Denkou then? Denkou knew this was another being for its body would have glowed with a harmless blue electricity as it would be within the fog. That was another special property of this technique. Anyone within the dark fog who wasn't the caster would gain a blue electric glow. That would be how he determined their locations without actually seeing them. The new body would most likely disappear by being in the path of the other attacks.

Denkou would finally stopped his movement at a new point along the outskirts of the dark fog, about 20 meters from his previous position, yet still within it. He would be on the side of a building and would peer around it to see his prey. He would let out another roar toward the bodies sending a single bolt of electricity toward them. This bolt of electricity was similar to a single beam of his laser circus. It was a meter wide. A meter and a half taller. This beam would go through the weak structures of buildings toward the three, drawing lethal debris ahead of it. This beam held the same intentions of vaporizing them with extreme heat.
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyThu May 05, 2011 5:38 pm

[As said by Jaden, energy cannot stop an attack with that sort of momentum and penetrating ability. And as you failed to mention the actual direction of the laser itself, I shall do that too. You cannot say I cannot as you did the same with Eskaru's Ice Bird thingies by claiming they had a linear trajectory. So I'm calling a hit.]

For a moment. Just for a moment, it seemed as if the beast would live. It was true that at that distance, and frozen with fear, it could not be dodged. But what if it were to be blocked? And that is what it seemed would happen as one of those wayward beams of energy deviated from its path to meet the bullet head one at a perpendicular trajectory. And it seemed that it might actually be able to block that bullet. But it was not meant to be. The sheer momentum and piercing power of that technique could not be blocked, or even deviated, by something like that. Not only was it simply a wayward blob-like beam of energy, its source had been disrupted and its power was naturally weakened manifold. Although he could not calculate all that in the split second moment the two forces intercepted, he was the one to have the last laugh as the bullet went straight through the laser, hardly even phased by it, while the laser dissipated before its force. It was over for the beast, a sad loss indeed, as the bullet pierce the center of its skull, going all the way across, leaving the beast a lifeless husk which would collapse on the floor. Due to the linear trajectory of the attacks made post his own, they would pass over the beast and head off in some direction or the other. Good thing too. He wanted that tigers skin for himself. But skinning it would come later. It was likely that there were more of them and he wouldn't wait around to give them an opening. He didn't wait to notice if anyone else was within the vicinity. He formed a hand seal in preparation regardless.

[I know its crappy, but its 5 Am and I have to sleep.
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyThu May 05, 2011 6:00 pm

[My response to your claim. As it had been discussed, I don't believe your bullet is to be as fast as you think it. I also don't know what makes you think this attack is so slow or weak that it can not prevent that bullet from reaching Denkou.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdSFkyPqERg

At 6:48 you see how fast this technique is when used by a human of normal proportions. And the power it has as well

THIS being the jutsu in discussion. Compared to a single one of THESE with an electrical property added.

As the beam in discussion was produce by Denkou, who is quite large, is a larger scaled version of the attack. The beam being a meter wide and a meter tall traveling over a distance of 15 meters. I don't see how its own force and size wouldn't be enough to deflect a single bone not much larger than an inch. Even with its added electrical properties, I believe that the size of the beam made of electrical energy should also be able to absorb that of the bullet as well.

Also I think this should be taken in consideration, the rules of counterbalancing jutsus:

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For relationships between chakra natures, there is a principle known as counterbalancing (相殺, Sōsai). This principle states that two techniques of the same nature would cancel each other out if the same amount of chakra was put into them. For example, in Kakashi's fight with Kakuzu, he was able to cancel Kakuzu's Lightning Release: False Darkness by deflecting it with his own technique, the Lightning Cutter.

However, if one of the techniques had more chakra put into it, it would overcome the other technique. Not only that, but the stronger technique would absorb the weaker one, and the user of the weaker technique would receive more damage than the original amount, as he will have added to the technique. For example, in Sasuke's fight with Itachi, they both use the Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique against each other, and Sasuke's technique begins to overwhelm Itachi's only when he activates his Cursed Seal of Heaven. Itachi responds to this by using Amaterasu, the highest level Fire Release technique, which takes over all the fire previously created by the two techniques, and absorbs it and grows to the point of blacking out Sasuke's range of vision.

Also considering your jutsu:

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~Name~: Drilling Rail Gun Bullet
Type Ninjutsu
Rank: C ~ A
Element: Lightning
Description: Using the Lightning Element, a Kaguya Clan user may induce an electrical charge along his finger tips. Sparks would appear to dance from the finger in question, magnifying the piercing ability and speed of the Finger Drilling Bullet Technique many fold. Depending upon the bone density of the user and his rank, it can go as far as being a technique that cannot be blocked. If all five fingers are used, then the lightning is divided between them. But if a single bullet is used from either hand, the lightning is collected and compressed at that particular bullet, giving it unimaginable velocity.

Its amplification depends on the rank of the user. You're still a genin and that would leave it at C-rank. Compared to this A-rank connecting with it in its own motion.

Since you described the beams of some dispersing and some just going off course, from effect of your predatory instinct, but didn't state which direction exactly, with timing in consideration as well, I believe I effectively used that vagueness to use a beam going off course to intercept that one bullet.

With that said, I would like a formal judgement and until then I believe this topic to be on hiatus until one is made.]
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyThu May 05, 2011 6:08 pm

[My turn then? Good. Laser Circus is a channeling Jutsu. It channels energy into beams which then proceed towards the enemy. By cancelling the channeling, the beams would obviously loose energy. It was my bad to assume that the beams would go haphazardly, randomly striking anything. And I'm sure you're going to hold on to that. But no matter what you claim, a channeling technique is nothing once the channeling is stopped. Its more like a shadow of the power the real thing exhibits. Now, I don't know who will judge this... but my first claim is that all the beams should have dissipated. I know that I wrote they went around randomly, but I realize that was incorrect and the show have dissipated entirely. If you feel that you cannot change that event, then there is my second claim which is basically a continuation of my channeling theory is that the moment the channeling would be cancelled, the beams would become infinitely weaker. When channeling energy is the complete basis of this jutsu then stopping that process would end the jutsu and if not end it completely, it would weaken those beams to a degree where a jutsu with such immense momentum and penetrating power would at least cut right through it. That is all I'm saying.

P.s. Doesn't matter if Denkou is 10 ft tall or 20 ft tall, the intensity would be the same. The size may differ. Just by pumping more chakra into a jutsu, you can't make it stronger. You'll just make it unstable.]
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyThu May 05, 2011 6:10 pm

{Buddy, I change the way they move, they don't go linear.

This jutsu creates a cluster of ice needles in the shape of miniature swallows, which the user then throws at the opponent. These needles can change direction in midair and will maim the opponent with their sharp wings. This jutsu can be eliminated by Fire techniques.

Here yah go, hope that clarifies things.]
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PostSubject: Re: Outside the kage's building.   Outside the kage's building. - Page 2 EmptyThu May 05, 2011 6:17 pm

(also,as I said, shockwave gets bigger as it moves. You wouldnt of had as much force but you would have been zapped.

Sooo...)
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