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Rain Genin
TP : 0 Posts : 36 Join date : 2011-05-01 Location : Unknown
Ninja Profile Main Class: Tank Secondary Class: Sensor Sensei:
| Subject: Rain Inuzuka Complete Sun May 01, 2011 8:49 pm | |
| Personal Information Name: Rain Inuzuka Age: 16 Gender: Male Village: KirigakureNinja Information Rank: Genin Clan Inuzuka Main Class: Tank Secondary Class Sensor Element Appearance and Personality Only 16 year's of age Rain seems to look so much older than usual. He is very tall and seems to be around the same size as an actual adult. As an inuzuka he has a rather feral like appearance with large white canin teeth. Bearing the usual mark's of the inuzuka clan which consist of fang like paint marking upon both cheek's. His hair is spiky and long while his eyes seem to be big and dog like giving a new name to puppy dog eye's. A Bandanna shiny bannana yellow is sat ontop of his head with a black skull and cross bones located in the centre of it
His torso is incredibly muscular yet rather skinny showing his nimble form. Bearing a six back his body is shown of thanks to the small stretchy black materials which covers a miniscule amount of space covering only his peck area's and shoulder's. A few inches of the material is made of fish net material which cover's to the hinge joint on his arm's upon the black material is his chest like area which holds a small icon of his village being the icon of kirigakure. This isnt covered OR but a single other layer is located on his chest area this being a brown jacket with no sleeves but fur covering the neck and shoulder area
His arm's are bare minus the bit covered by the fish nets on his top. Located lower down his wrists and part of his arm is covered by bandages tho this is unknown black fingerless gloves cover his hands to show off his rather long claw like finger nails
His trouser's start of with the same fur like qaulities that the jacket is made of they are infact black rather than the same brown. There incredibly bagging so he keeps them up with a scraggy belt. Bandages cover a small portion of his leg's the end of the trouser legs have fur like the rest of his outfit.
His shoe's are black and opened toed like usual tho are infact longer than other's
Puppies - Spoiler:
Personality: Within a battle Rain is cool calm and collected, Never once will he underestimate his opponent no matter what the foe's rank is whether a genin or a kage, Within Rains mind a genin is just the same as a kage and needs to be handled like one. Life or Death battles excite the shinobi causing his flirty or cocky side to come out tho he acts in this manner once more underestimating his opponent is something he refuses to do. During training, Rain will fight as if the fight is serious never underestimating or taking it easy on his partner, He refuses to go down in training tho is smart enough to not use deadly attack's to there full potential. He despised those who kill and gloat a kill unless requires should not happen in his eye's A kill that helps keep and or protect memories should be kept quitely and a kill of a powerful shinobi should be honoured and not gloated about. He has father issues therefore believes all fathers are despised by there siblings. Due to never having a female role model he doesnt really know how to react around them and acts shy when first meeting them.
Likes: Rain enjoy's the usual thing's the rain the wamrth of a fire just like everyone else he has many likes to many to be listedJustu E rank are free* - Spoiler:
Name: Fang Passing Fang Rank C Type Tai Description The user and his partner spin at a ferocious speed and deliver many powerful beast-like attacks when contact is made with the target. The force of this attack is strong enough to drill through stone. This attack can be done alone, although it is less effective.
Name: Beast Human Clone RankD TypleTaijutsu Description A modified version/mix of a Transformation Technique and a clone technique, this jutsu, unique to the Inuzuka clan, allows a canine-user to transform their animal companion into a perfect copy of themselves. When combined with the Four Legs Technique, the user and the animal become virtually impossible to tell apart, since both act equally animalistic. Like any transformation, the jutsu can be broken by identifying and attacking the animal, thus dispelling the transformation. This jutsu is often followed by the Fang Passing Fang.
Name: Passing Fang Rank D Type Tai Description The user spins at a ferocious speed and delivers many powerful beast-like attacks when contact is made with the target. The damage it can inflict on a human target can be extremely damaging, as it can readily tear through thick tree branches and chakra reinforced earth wall; all of which with a radius thicker than the user itself.[2][3] This attack is done alone but it can be done with a partner, making it more effective.
Name: Four Legs Technique Rank D Type Ninjutsu Description This technique grants animal-like accelerated fighting instinct and reflexes to the user. By enveloping their entire body in chakra and moving on all fours, they can obtain high speed movement and reflexes like that of a wild animal. Taught only to the members of the Inuzuka clan, this technique forms the basis of a Inuzuka clan member's taijutsu fighting style, and will add even more to their feral-like appearances; their canine teeth, their finger and toenails grow to claw-like length, their eyes also become more wild with their pupils becoming slits.
When under the effects of this jutsu, an Inuzuka will display great feats of physical strength, speed, and endurance. The form is best suited for using and supporting the ferocious "hit-and-run" tactics that the clan is well known for, leaving the enemy barely any time to launch a counter attack.
Name: Fang Rotating Fang Rank C Type Tai Description The user rolls in a buzz-saw like shape, along with their ninken companion at high speeds to attack the enemy.
Weapons Weapon(1) Kunai Weapon(2) Sooty Weapon(3) Scarlette Weapon(4) Explosive Tags Weapon(5) Smoke Bombs History History:Birth Arc - Spoiler:
Rukia Inuzuka's face lit up with such a beautiful smile as the medic ninja who was inspecting her told her the news that she had fallen pregnant. It indeed came as a shock to the Inuzuka member who was previously told 3 year's ago she would not be able to concieve a child. Once she had been inspected and had been given the ok she ran home with all her speed and threw open the door to Rei Inuzuka cooking her dinner. Not saying a word she kissed him and placed his hand on her stomach whispering to him the good new's as tear's of joy ran down her face he simply held her his smile growing upon his own face.
5 month's down the line of her pregnancy saw some complication's. She was indeed having trouble breathing and was vomiting up blood. As she was taken to the hospital she forced Rei to remain outside Her examination came up and soon enough she was told some harsh new's. She was reminded of the whole within her heart and that the pregnancy was putting so much strength on her heart that she had a 90% chance of death if she continued with the pregnancy. Her choice was a yes and that she forced the medic ninja to lie to her husband who was later told that the baby and his wife was fine. After that she returned home and began to live life as normally as she could.
After 9 months and 4 weeks her water broke on her errand's and she was indeed rushed into hospital. Sadly Rey was placed on an important S-Rank mission and was unable to be there for the birth. As she was in the delivary room the usual thing's happened and soon she was holding her new baby boy whom after looking down on the gloomy day she named Rain. As she took her first hug of her son her eyes slowly slid closed as her life force faded and soon the echoing noise of the life machines beeped loudly in the room forcing the young baby to cry.
Due to no other family member's located in the village Rain was forced to live out his first 2 week's of his life in the hospital. After two week's Rey arrived back in the village he knew perfectly well his child was to be born and as soon as he was back he darted to the hospital and his voice rang through the hospital as e proudly stated his wife's name. And he knew something was wrong. And at that moment if the hospital had been silent you would have heard his heart break. His breath became rapid as he began to find it hard to breath his whole body felt in horrible pain as his hands clenched his long nails cutting into his palms as tear's began to fall from his eye's. Tears falling hard as for now his sobs began to grow louder and louder before his scream rumbled through the entire hospital it was'nt just one scream no hundreds of screams blasted from his mouth as he held onto his stomach feeling the burn in his throat. hours passed and the shinobi finally calmed down before he was taken to the room were his son was. Tho he could not smile he could not act happy indeed he felt love for his son but the grief of losing his only true love was simply greater.
Toddler Arc - Spoiler:
While Growing Up Rain could tell his father seemed happy but as happy as he could be. He simply broke down and refused to speak to anyone for hours if Rain's mother was brought up. This led Rain to stop asking about here. Tho he always fantasized about what she looked like. He wondered if she was pretty he kinda gathered she had brown hair as Rey had green.
The only times his father seemed intrigued was when he would teach Rain. He simply taught Rain the basic's of chakra control and weapon using before they would go to the academy. During one of these day's his father took Rain to the area were the inuzuka gain there ninja dog companion's. This was done by the inuzuka member sitting within a large seal which would proceed to extract chakra slowly and send it into the air which would connect a chakra bond to the ninja and there companion. Rain would only be located within the sealfor five minutes before he heard the yapping of a small puppy running from the other end of the room toward's the young boy. The small light red dog barked excitedly tho rather clumsily toward's the shinobi tho was soon overtaken by a bullet like shape. A bigger and darker pup and blasted past making little no sound what so ever causing the young shinobi to fall over from the force. The black pup began to lick the boy's face and soon after that he would feel another set of paw's clambering onto him as the red pup had made it. "So...your like your mother eh" his father would say. The keeper of the Inuzuka pup institution would slowly walk out the door smiling. "One of the rare ones then Rain we have many here but only a handful leave with two pup's your chakra must be attractive to them" he said with a smile as the pups refused to leave there new companion alone. He would get up and pay the ryo to the man before leaving with his father and his new companions waddling beside him tho they stopped ever now and again to get a sniff of the place. Rain had already decided on the less scary names The black pup with red eye's was to be called sooty the other red one scarlette tho he inspected her and found a small scar upon her head so he nicknamed the small pup scar. They would then begin there bonding and training together
Academy - Spoiler:
When he became a member of the academy rain was infact known as a lazy student mostly because he had already learned the technique's required and the chakra control needed for them. He had also learned his clan's techniques due to the training his father gave him.
He simply watched as the day's flew by watching the other shinobi train and train the basic jutsu while he proceeded to make sure he had the clan training down with his dog's. As an inuzuka they were partnered with pups who were just as smart and clever as normal shinobi. Rain was a rare inuzuka in the fact that instead of one pup he had two allowing for stronger jutsu.
Well the time came the genin were placed into a room and were told to kill each other the ones who were left standing would pass.
the battle began kunai landed on the floor genin cried and roared as they were chopped down some managed to flee but some tried to fight tho a powerful roar erupted "FANG PASSING FANG" as three tornado like figures darted into shinobi the presure and power throwing them against walls shattering rib cages some even were struck in the face there skulls shattered. It came down to five people each covered in blood tho not shattered Rain fell to his knee's mindless violence. one pounced on rain but was pushed away by Sooty and in the end rain had no choice and cut them down tho hatred filled his every being as he walked out he room to claps his father ran up and hugged him but rain pushed him off
After a long shower Rain came down the stairs to his father whistling he didnt even notice him so he ran up the stairs and pulled himself into the attic were he found picture's of his mom. This then meant that he could do something she was beautiful and as he walked down the stairs he transformed dishes smashed and his father roared but Rain roared back in his mother's form shots echoed until his father broke down and rain transformed back. "I hate you dad...you could have warned me id have to kill the people i made promises to the people i swore to protect......mom would be rolling in her grave"
And with that he went up the stairs only to hear a knock at the door as his teacher stood there and promoted him to genin.
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| Subject: Re: Rain Inuzuka Complete Sun May 01, 2011 9:51 pm | |
| If you have a clan you get their element if your clan has no element then you get no starting element, please remove your element As well I'd give this app a 2/5 so please remove three jutsu and weapons
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| | | Saitou Hajime Legendary Sannin
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| Subject: Re: Rain Inuzuka Complete Sun May 01, 2011 10:32 pm | |
| Nice enough history, good physical description along with the picture, nice personality.
4/5. I'll bump you to a 5 if you give me more personality. | |
| | | Sazenkaijenfu Aburame Kage
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| Subject: Re: Rain Inuzuka Complete Mon May 02, 2011 12:00 am | |
| Alright, unless anyone else has a problem, I say your all set. 5/5 and approved. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Inuzuka Complete Mon May 02, 2011 4:37 am | |
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| | | Rain Genin
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| Subject: Re: Rain Inuzuka Complete Mon May 02, 2011 4:41 am | |
| Hmmm
not to start an argument but Akki i needed kage permission i would like to ask why you believe 4/5 i wouldnt like to boast as its not the best app ever but personally i believe its in the 5.5 mark | |
| | | King Z Chunin
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| Subject: Re: Rain Inuzuka Complete Mon May 02, 2011 4:57 am | |
| you dont have descriptions on your puppies, your toddler arc is way to small to be considered, you never talked about what its like being an inuzuka with two puppies, and you never gave specifics why you got to and what made you special to get them. | |
| | | King Z Chunin
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| Subject: Re: Rain Inuzuka Complete Mon May 02, 2011 6:42 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Inuzuka Complete Mon May 02, 2011 7:53 am | |
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