Custom Shit of Uson

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~Name~: Eight Trigrams Empty Palm Blast
TypeTaijutsu
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Description:
Uson adds his fuuton affinity to the parent jutsu known as Empty Palm. By adding the wind release into this tech it greatly increases it's size to that of a human body. The blast is so powerful that each time it's used, it physically pushes Uson back a distance of Fifteen Yards. The impact effect is strong enough to leave a large radius crater when it connects with a solid surfaces such as concrete.

Approved I guess

~Name~: Eight Trigrams Heavenly Whirl Wind
TypeTaijtusu
Rank: A
Element: Fuuton
Description: Uson uses the same basic that appy to his clan's kaiten tech, except accelerates the rotation speed, and adds an affinty into the jutsu. The result is a powerful offensive three-sixty degree tornado, that expands up to 20 meters, and has a pull in effect of up to 10 meters. This enhanced fuuton kaiten produces winds so strong that it easily produces chainsaw like lacerations upon anything that happens to touch the spinning vortext effectively slicing through nearly any substance such as bone, wood, iron and steel. As the jutsu continues to slow down the mighty kaiten produces it's signature throw away flinging the shred, and torn micro remants of it's victims. After using this Uson is unable to use Ninjutsu for 2 post.[This Jutsu has a cool down of 4 Post]

Drawbacks?

Oh Shiz! My bad. Tech draw back added.

Bump it to A-rank.

Upped to A

Approved Good job btw very good technique

~Name~: Eight Trigrams Hellzone
Type:Taijtusu, KKG
Rank: S
Element:
Description: HIghly Similar to the jutsu known as Eight Trigrams One-Hundred Twenty Eight Palms. With a few differances. Once the target enters this field of diviations the target wheter it is man or ninjutsu. The movement is speed reduced to that of a snail crawl. Efffectively hindering speed of the said noun. To an on looker outside of diviations it would appear that Uson is moving extremely fast, but in reality things just happen to slow down signifiactly for him to manuever himself. The Diviation range is no more than 25 meters, and no less. It is possible to cancel the diviations effect, if Uson is hit, or even touched. Uson's Byakugan Must be activated to use this Jutsu. For this to activate Uson must open, and close one of his palms.
Duration: Four Post (Mine)
Cooldown: Six Post Cooldown (Mine)

DO you need to take a stance for this to be activated? If this is done with your Byakugan then please add that into the description. Is this jutsu always active or do you have to activate it?

Okay Edited.

Approved

~Name~: Heavely Temple
TypeTaijutsu
Rank: S
Element: None
Description:
Uson has honned his body to house nearly unmatched strengh far beyond human limits. As a Taijutsu master he has trainned recklessly in the art of body techniuqes. As the fruits of his effort has finally paid off Uson's natural talent has increased drastically in stenght and phyiscal durablity. As such Uson can exert a physical force at the peak of Seventeen Tons Naturally. In addition to this Uson has learned to adapt to kinetic energy in such a way he no longer can he be knocked down upon his ass or pushed back nomal means of physical force. It would now take a force of 3.5 tons to lift, push back or knock him down. As such the Taijutsu maters skin is now as naturally four times as durable as steel it's self.
(Keep my Strenght Stat In Mind Please. It's 30)
Heavenly Temple: There is a red visible outline of chakra showing this is active. Last for 3 Post, Cooldown 5 Post. Speed and Agility are dropped a rank(-5 in those Stats) during this.




~Name~: Fuuton Chakra Enhanced Strenght.
Type(Eh Taijutsu?}
Rank: S
Element: Wind
Description: An upgraded Version of the standard Chakra Enhanced Jutsu. This is Uson's Custom version which adds the affinity of wind chakra into the mix of the already powerful techniuqe. With adding the fuuton affinity the enhancement of physical supremacy breaks and redifines what people believe is physical authority beyond and above. When swinging Uson, releases his fuuton chakra which allows for his attacks to move as, if phantom style attacks following with his movements. As such a simple swing of his fist could erode the earth kicking up much debri such as stone dust, and pieces of earth itself. Using this fuuton enhanced strenght it is quite possible to throw punches that would rip some parts of the earth from their natural resiting place.
Fuuton Chakra Enhanced Strength: This makes the user more vulnerable to fire based techniques(Fire Damage goes up 1 Rank). Last 2 Posts, Cooldown 3 posts.



~Name~: Voice of the Heavens
Type
Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Element: Wind
Description: Uson has taken a permant vow of slience. He has attempted to focus his whole body into a weapon. Uson has struck two tenketsu in such a magnificent way that now he can no longer speak without emitting an intense wave of fuuton chakra. Do to this he is unable to speak permantly unless he allows himself to do so with the an unavoidable possiblity of causing harm and destruction in the area. As his now chakra constantly builds up inside of his mouth making him possibly a voice of death and tragedy. As even his slightest wishper can destroy a building made of concrete. His range of renosance, and pure desctruction depends on how he speaks. As such he requires handsigns to produce the resonic authority.
Voice of The Heavens: The range of the vocal waves and power depends on the way one is speaking. Whisper, Can blast through normal wood; Range: 15 meters. Normal Speech, can blast through normal rock; Range: 10 meters. Yelling, can blast through concrete buildings and bend normal steel slightly; Range: 5 meters. The sound waves visibly ripple through the air in a linear direction, each wave has a circular shape with a 5 meter diameter. Last 3 Post, Cooldown 5 Posts.

~Name~: Wind Style Shadow Cone Jutsu
TypeNinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Fuuton
Description: Uson creates a ball of released chakra with the fuuton affinity. By doing this it is a temporary battery cell for his version of a clone. The wind clone is extremely fast and can revert to it's ball form to travel nearly instantly to anywhere in an area of 20-40 meters. Making it great for assasination attacks. As the clone can't acttually be destoyed by ordinary means like regular taijutsu it can be destoryed by chakra based ninjutu. However after 2 post it's battery life will diminish completely allowing it be destoryed regardless, if it's been destoryed or not. When the clone is destory it produces a pull in effect drawining in anything that is in the range of eight meters. This does not harm them, but makes it a simple pull in effect or push back effect.

~Name~: Lighting Style Shadow Clone
TypeNinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Lighting
Description: Uson creates a small ball with the lighting affinity. This may seem similar to the wind clone, but it has differnt effects. Such as once the clone it's self is desroyed the lighting ball of Ration chakra will immediatly lock in it's place spinning rapidly. The ball of lighting will act as an electro magnetic force. Pulling in chakra based PROJECTILE Attacks, Clones and magnetic properties. This would include for example a fire ball jutsu, or a water dragon release jutsu, and kunai. However techinques like Rasengan, or Eight gates would not be applied, since they are not projectile based. The spinning lighting last for three post, but can be destory an A-Rank Fuuton technique. Alternately one may attempt to apply enough phsyical force to the lighting sphere, at the cost of being extremely damaged by the lighting.

Heavenly Temple Denied, There's no point to it. If your strength is 30, then its 30. No need to defined it in a jutsu such as this.

Fuuton Chakra Enhanced Strength is very vague, define the changes in difference between normal Chakra Enhanced Strength and this Fuuton version. What makes it so much stronger than the previous version. Also so you know, chakra enhanced strength can be more powerful despite its rank since it depends on the one using it and how much chakra is placed into a single hit.

Voice of the Heavens Denied, its not a taijutsu but a ninjutsu. It also seems like something that will always be in effect which to me is more of an ability than a jutsu. A range is needed and very important or it could be easily god modded. I also don't think its a very wise jutsu because of its rank being S, could easily drain you depending on how much you say. So unless you plan on editing it then denied.

Okay thanks Dante. Few questions though.

The your strength is just 30 comment makes no sense to me. Stats are here for a reason to define what we can do or what our limits are. I'd like to expand on that, because saying its just 30 doesn't define or tell what my shinobi is capable of. Its basically saying there are no point of having stats if we cant describe what they do. Can you define just 30?

The Fuuton Chakra Enhanced Strength I've got in mind would deal with impact and range. As Tsunade can create gaint crarters with a finger, and ect. Overall adding an element into the mix would make it several times stronger logically as shown manga wise.

My third jutsu needs alot work, but not to insult you or anything, but was your reason for thinking it to be ninjutsu do the explination of chakra build up? The fight between Naruto and Sasuke Naruto released a vocal shock wave when in the KNT1. It was strong enough to overpower a kanton of Sasuke. Even the afternoon tiger had sonic impact. Lets tweak this

With your strength at 30, you already have physical strength greater than that of the average legendary jounin/kage. However as you've noticed there is no way to really say how much that is. Yet making a jutsu like this could be setting the boundary way above what you're capable of, because we already don't know. Besides this is pretty OP in my eyes. I'll have to ask for another opinion on this one.

Now if you don't see something wrong with that idea given your own example then allow me to tell you. If Tsunade could create a crater with a single finger, why would you think someone would allow you to make the technique several times stronger. Its already close to being OP, no need to try and make even stronger versions. Thats asking for too much. So Denied for sure.

Yeah but also think about the fact that your examples are of people in an extraordinary state of being. Naruto being in a cloaked bijuu form, plus lets not use Naruto as an example because main characters get more power than others anyway. Guy was in a gate form, which gate i can't remember, but a gate none the less. You're talking about making your voice so that whisper can destroy a building. I also say it should be a ninjutsu because you pretty much could god mod and say you killed someone then and there without need of a hand seal. Plus taijutsu is all about physical contact, you're projecting and amplifying sound, something that would be considered an ninjutsu. So Denied unless edited.

The 30 stats strenght, I understand a bit, but setting the bar high or above the boundary gives no real definition of physical limitation. As Humans can naturally lift up to one ton. As Shinobi that regural logic of what a human body can do is broken already. As Shinobi can leap several meters in a single bound by jumping. Someone like Itachi who hasn't shown physical prowness can grip sasuke and sling him around like a ragdoll with one hand. In this jutsu of course I am breaking what we can do phyisically by normal human standards, but such as Naruto Universe. Not everything is applied the same. As the world of Naruto I don't think this is above what has already been shown. Compared to A, and B. As their physical strenght has been displayed as such. Without a Bijuu cloak and lighting armor they are cable of knocking down walls of concrete, and capable of taking kicks from Ninja such as Sasuke without being pushed back or flinching.

As the second jutsu. It all depends on how it is displayed, and written out. Just because something is already powerful doesn't nessacrly mean it should be disapproved before hand. As It's not complete, and is possibly something differnt. Of course I plan to go past what Tsunade, and Sakura can do. However until I am done I don't really think it should be dismissed, just because it is a version of this or that. As Chidori is already powerful, but again we have an even powerful version of it in Rariki. So, overal several times stronger by logically adding an element into the mix depends on how it's displayed and written, thus it shouldn't be denied right off the bat.

No, Taijutsu does with body based technique. Even so, if Guy or Naruto were in high powered states of beings. That alone is still taijutsu regardless of how it is projected. Even the Kaiten is considered taijutsu. I'll edit this, because I did ask for help, and you are attemping to help me. So I'll bump shortly when this is all done.

Okay, you know what.

Divine Temple will not be passive, give it a duration and cooldown along with a drawback. Also edit in something that shows this mode is active.

Fuuton Chakra Enhanced Strength will be Ninjutsu just like the jutsu its derived from. I want a drawback for this as well. As well as a cooldown.

Voice of the Heavens will be Ninjutsu and not passive. A drawback is needed as well as a cooldown. I expect a range also.

If you can't accept and edit this in accordance, its all denied.

There bumpy and Editted. I still need a range from you.

Heavenly Temple: There is a red visible outline of chakra showing this is active. Last for 3 Post, Cooldown 5 Post. Speed and Agility are dropped a rank(-5 in those Stats) during this.

Fuuton Chakra Enhanced Strength: This makes the user more vulnerable to fire based techniques(Fire Damage goes up 1 Rank). Last 2 Posts, Cooldown 3 posts.

Voice of The Heavens: The range of the vocal waves and power depends on the way one is speaking. Whisper, Can blast through normal wood; Range: 15 meters. Normal Speech, can blast through normal rock; Range: 10 meters. Yelling, can blast through concrete buildings and bend normal steel slightly; Range: 5 meters. The sound waves visibly ripple through the air in a linear direction, each wave has a circular shape with a 5 meter diameter. Last 3 Post, Cooldown 5 Posts.

Editted, and I added a new jutsu on this page. The wind clone.

Whatever, my wind clone is better than yours

All approved

Lighting Clone has just been added, and needs to be approved.

~Name~: Dragon Breathing Technqiue
TypeTaijutsu
Rank: C
Element:
Description: By focusing the amout of air he in takes to his lungs, Uson begins to empty his mind while attempting to let his body flow and move naturally. His body becomes less stiff and more agile to allowing him to be better suited in situations of Taijutsu. While using this breathing techinuqe Uson's speed and agilty are on par with that of the Third Chakra gate Naturally.

~Name~: Phoenix Breathing Technique
TypeTaijutsu
Rank: B
Element:
Description: By increasing the amount of oxygen he intakes Uson has found a uniuqe way to increase his hearing, and sense of touch to a higher level of senses beyond what people may normally be used to. His heartbeat also plays a special fuction.

- Uson sense of touch is so acute that his finger can feel the faint impressions of ink on a scroll, allowing him to read by touch. The rest of his skin is equally sensitive, enabling him by concentration to feel minute temperature and pressure changes in the atmosphere around him. Even with his senses of smell and hearing blocked, he can feel the presence of a person standing five feet away from him simply by his or her body heat and disturbance of air.

-Xin Li sense of hearing enables him to detect an acoustic pressure change of one decibel at a pressure level of seven decibels (whereas the lowest threshold for average human hearing is twenty decibels.) He can hear a person's heartbeat at a distance of over twenty feet, or people whispering on the other side of a standard soundproofed wall. Through practice, Xin Li is able to control his hearing acuity, mentally blocking out specific sounds like his own breathing and heartbeat, all ambient sounds to a normal human level of perception, or all sounds but a particular sound he is concentrating upon.